mpreg ficlet: Illness

[ancalime8301]

Started this yesterday, finished it today. Actually ran it through the spellcheck. ;) Here ya go... and I know I didn't go into as much detail as I could've on some parts (even though it's one of the longest of these mpreg bits so far, being 2.5 pages single-spaced); just look at it as leaving room for embellishment at a later date. :D

Comments

[febobe]

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Does THAT give you any indication how this made me feel? :D Oh, Cali, it's WONDERFUL!!!!! I absolutely LOVE it!!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

Snuggliedances,
Febobe :D

[ancalime8301]

:D

Only too happy to provide early-morning entertainment. 0:)

Glad you enjoyed. *grins* ;)

[shirebound]

I probably won't be able to read this until later today, but I can't wait!

:)

[aprilkat]

the legendary stubborn one

*sporfle*

This was a gem - both mpreg AND h/c! I'm just glad I don't have to take care of a sick hobbit. I haven't the patience or will of Elrond...

[ancalime8301]

Glad you enjoyed it! :)

I haven't the patience or will of Elrond...

I don't either. ;)

[shirebound]

You will continue this, won't you?? Eeee, love it! (I do wish there had been a bit more dialogue, but I'm just rather partial to dialogue.) But... Frodo!ill!mpreg!Elrond!legendary stubborn one!

:)

[ancalime8301]

Well, I do believe I have to continue it somewhere along the way, seeing how I left the poor pregnant hobbit just beginning to recover... ;) As for dialogue, well, I've been noticing how much some of the other parts of this tale rely on conversation, and considering that I've always said dialogue is one of my weakest spots, I don't feel too bad for leaving it out of this one. :p That said, there is certainly a lot they'll need to talk about, so you can be sure there will be more dialogue in the sequel of this and other parts of the story (there's only so much one can say while sick with the flu, you see). ;)

Frodo!ill!mpreg!Elrond!legendary stubborn one!

Hee... glad you liked! :) And I've all but promised febobe an expansion of this ficlet, so there'll be more to come eventually (and probably more dialogue in there, as well ;)). :D

[girlofring]

I do love a good mpreg tale. please do continue it. He is just so stubborn, is he not??????

looking for more soon.

[ancalime8301]

Aw, thanks! And there will have to be more eventually... ;) He is indeed quite stubborn, silly hobbit. :p