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Fic: 221B - Taken (3/6)

Oct 09, 2012 22:09

Title: Taken (3/6)
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

( Day 160 - Something was not right. )

this is kinda dark, there's a basement in here, anarion is evil, 221b, sherlock_bbc, slash, hurt without comfort, prompt-fill, angst, 365 days challenge, sherlock/john

Comments 7

verityburns October 9 2012, 20:24:44 UTC

ARGH!!!!!

That is all.

Well, OK, maybe it's not all - but that is the main thing.

Please, PLEASE give us the next chapter soon and make it all rescue-y and lovely and EVERYTHING!!!

Oh, poor Sherlock. *bites nails*

Your 'tension to words' ratio is ridiculously high. How do you DO that?!

chocolamousse October 9 2012, 20:43:09 UTC

He sounded like someone who enjoyed seeing others in pain.
Thank you. Now I feel very reassured about what will happen next. You know what? This is you. You sound like someone who enjoys seeing others, I mean your readers, in pain. :D

"Not everything is about you. You are just the bait."
Poor Sherlock. Everything hurts, his body and his ego.

Because he will come for you, like he always came for you.
“John.”
*starts sniggering*
Hey, look, here's an innuen... Sorry, I can’t giggle, it’s an angst scene. Aso, it's a lovely nod to "He is going to find me. I know he is. He always does." from your Caring Is Not an Advantage. I love your Mycroft. And I can't wait for the next part!

Maybe you could add a link to the first part, for your oblivious readers! :-)

verityburns October 9 2012, 20:57:54 UTC

he will come for you, like he always came for you.

How did I miss this? HOW?

*resigns as Captain of the Innuendo Squad*

*Hands crown to chocola*

Take good care of that, chocola... I'll be back!

chocolamousse October 9 2012, 21:39:56 UTC

Oh no, no, keep the crown please, it would be too much pressure. You missed the innuendo because you're a tenderhearted woman and you were busy angsting over Sherlock. I'm a cold-hearted bitch and I sneer in the face of angst. *lies* Also, you forget you are the one who taught me to spot innuendos and to snigger mercilessly by spotting my own innuendos and sniggering mercilessly. I still remember your reaction here, and it still makes me giggle hysterically when I re-read it. So, keep the crown, Captain. I'll be Douglas. Or Arthur, if you prefer. :D

sabrinaphynn October 9 2012, 23:19:51 UTC

Said it over on AO3, but it bears repeating...
Dude- no matter who you are working for, enraging this guy's lover as well as his brother the default King of Britain?
That is a REALLY bad idea.
Because you will insist on underestimating John, like everyone does. (I sincerely doubt that Umbrella man is going to rein John in- at all. ). Cuddly and deadly as needed. So I am with Sherlock's first line of thinking here, his John will do anything to save him.
(gonna go with that thinking anyway, it is better on the nailbeds)

tracionn October 10 2012, 07:42:32 UTC

OhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGod
Yes, that sums up my inner status after having read this perfectly.
And this status wil continue until the last part I'm sure.
OhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGodOhGod!!!!!!
Pleeeease don't make us wait to long, pleeeeease!!???!!?

rox712 October 11 2012, 09:30:36 UTC

Come on, John, show the man who he should really be afraid of!