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anarion

Fic: 221B - ...is trouble halved (2/2)

Jul 20, 2012 21:26

Title: ...is trouble halved (2/2)
Words: 221
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

( Day 81 - John runs down the empty corridor until he reaches a corner. )

molly, 221b, humour, sherlock_bbc, slash, friends, hurt/comfort, prompt-fill, angst, bamf!john, 365 days challenge, sherlock/john

Comments 14

teejod July 20 2012, 20:03:54 UTC

Scalpel can be as good as a gun when used by BAMF!John saving his Sherlock.

Sunburn?! Treated at Bart’s?! Sherlock - tsk, tsk, tsk.

Well, that took care of this two-parter, which brings me back to the missing second part of the castle/castle-ruins prompt....

rox712 July 20 2012, 20:54:52 UTC

Wait, there is also the sequel to yesterdays sequel. It would be a negligence to forget that.

anarion July 20 2012, 21:12:32 UTC

Ok, I'm confused with all this sequel talk...

anarion July 21 2012, 09:02:44 UTC

Well, that took care of this two-parter, which brings me back to the missing second part of the castle/castle-ruins prompt....
Patients my dear! We still have... um... *grabs calculator* ... 284 days to go. :D

rox712 July 20 2012, 20:56:33 UTC

"No one gets to lay a finger on Sherlock while John is still breathing." Besides John himself, of course. I love BAMF!John.

anarion July 21 2012, 09:00:11 UTC

Who doesn't? *gets a littly dreamy eyed*

chocolamousse July 20 2012, 21:13:09 UTC

So it was not a crossover with Bones after all .HA HA HA. *laughs very loud to hide her embarrassment* It's so much better since it's about BAMF!John, and even better about BAMF-for-Sherlock!John. So these men stole a corpse. Hey, is it a crossover with Frankenstein? :D

Anyway, Sherlock, you don't have to go to St Barts to treat a sunburn. (A sunburn on this skin... Ouch.) You just have to ask John to put a cream on it and to massage softly and... and... We don't even know on which part of your body the sunburn is but... er... Anarion, I think this is a prompt. :D

anarion July 21 2012, 09:01:18 UTC

Anarion, I think this is a prompt. :D
I see that you switched from finding the innuendo in my 221Bs to finding possible prompts. *lol*

verityburns July 20 2012, 22:04:18 UTC

Ooh, great resolution! It's got lovely BAMF!John and great humour... but I also have to say that I am seriously impressed by the tension you build up so quickly and effectively in the first few paragraphs.

I know you've well and truly tapped into your talent for writing - I want to say 'toe-curlingly hot', but you're not big on the toes so insert your hot alternative of choice - porn, but I'm sensing a real gift for 'action / thriller' here.

Your writing just gets better all the time - and I am loving this journey!

anarion July 21 2012, 08:59:00 UTC

and I am loving this journey!
This ship (no pun intended for once) would've run aground a long time ago if it weren't for friends like you! *hugs*
Hell, it would have never left the dock without you in the first place!

I'm happy to hear that I'm not only good at building tension in another context. ;)
So I can do porn, humour, dialogue and action. The only thing I really suck at is plot. *lol*

Thank you for this cupcake of a comment! (Yes, I'm hungry. Why do you ask?)
<3

tracionn July 21 2012, 18:07:17 UTC

Ah, great conclusion! The beginning was so thrilling I could hardly breath and John's protectiveness over Sherlock just let my heart swell bigger and bigger. Wonderfully captured!