It reads perfectly beautifully as a story, without even knowing the background, but the way you've incorporated all those songs is nothing short of genius. I'm sure it would take me at least 5,000 words to cover an entire album - I am in awe!
Favourite phrase: 'a sleep-heavy hand'. That's gorgeous :D
Ah, insecure!John and reassuring !Sherlock. Good !
Whether I am Unwell or Cold, All I Need is to step into your arms, feel you holding me tight, your chin resting on top of my head, your breath ruffling my hair, and everything is instantly better. I'm sure I'd feel the same if I were in John's place. Can I be in John's place for a minute, please ? Just to be sure, you know.
“John, you are so much more than you think you are.” Perfect last sentence for a very lovely fic. John angsting in the dark (without any reason, as everybody knows, except him, of course ; read fanfics, John !) and Sherlock sorting everything out with a few loving words... Yep. I like that very much.
[Should I mention that the first word combination that caught my eye was 'Bent' and 'Push'?] No need to mention it. It was obvious ! :D
Did you notice I 've written a whole comment without using the words Sunday or blow ? And you say I'm not subtle ! Pft.
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It reads perfectly beautifully as a story, without even knowing the background, but the way you've incorporated all those songs is nothing short of genius. I'm sure it would take me at least 5,000 words to cover an entire album - I am in awe!
Favourite phrase: 'a sleep-heavy hand'. That's gorgeous :D
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See, everybody has their strength. I couldn't write 5000 words without losing every reader on the way. But your 5,000 words would be amazing! :)
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Whether I am Unwell or Cold, All I Need is to step into your arms, feel you holding me tight, your chin resting on top of my head, your breath ruffling my hair, and everything is instantly better.
I'm sure I'd feel the same if I were in John's place. Can I be in John's place for a minute, please ? Just to be sure, you know.
“John, you are so much more than you think you are.”
Perfect last sentence for a very lovely fic. John angsting in the dark (without any reason, as everybody knows, except him, of course ; read fanfics, John !) and Sherlock sorting everything out with a few loving words... Yep. I like that very much.
[Should I mention that the first word combination that caught my eye was 'Bent' and 'Push'?]
No need to mention it. It was obvious ! :D
Did you notice I 've written a whole comment without using the words Sunday or blow ? And you say I'm not subtle ! Pft.
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*dies laughing*
No need to mention it. It was obvious ! :D
Really? I wonder why...
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My fave part is that John's soul was a flickering light until Sherlock reignited it. sniffle
There are crossroads where someone holds out a gloved hand, and we take it or not.
The album title biz, so clever on top of the pretty. I love it!
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Aaw, thank you very much! <3
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