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Passing Embraces - Harry Potter - PG (AWDT)

Aug 21, 2006 08:43

TITLE: Passing Embraces
AUTHOR: anansay
FANDOM: Harry Potter
PAIRING/CHARACTERS: Harry, Draco, nameless, faceless students
WORDS: Just over 500. *cringes*
RATING: PG
GENRE: My poor attempt at humour?
WARNING: Nada.
DISCLAIMER: Not my characters. They belong to J. K. Rowling.
ADDITIONAL DISCLAIMER: This author is not responsible for underage readers. ( Read more... )

awdt, harry_draco

Comments 8

confiteor_3 August 21 2006, 14:18:55 UTC

Hehehe! The descriptions of the students all salivating over the prospect of food was funny (and disgusting because I have this thing where I can't stand spit). Harry and Draco's banter was refreshing. :) And the kiss and Ron butting in. The last few sentences. In other words, I very much enjoyed it.

anansay August 21 2006, 14:36:44 UTC

Oh, yeah: funny and disgusting. But I had to do it! I just HAD to! :P

That banter was about as much as I feel capable of doing, in any sort of way, well.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

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anansay August 21 2006, 15:13:43 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm glad my weak attempt at banter passed. *g*

enchanted_jae August 21 2006, 23:38:11 UTC

Wheee! Funny!

anansay August 22 2006, 12:18:28 UTC

Thank you! :)

chaeldub August 27 2006, 09:59:35 UTC

I love how Ron pulled Malfoy off Harry... probably wants him all to himself. Nice use of the prompt at the end... in fact the last three lines are perfect.

anansay August 28 2006, 01:38:23 UTC

Well, the 'best mate' HAS to help out, right? And yeah, those last lines, I really liked them too! *G*

Thank you! :D

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anansay August 29 2006, 02:27:58 UTC

Really?

Heh--visceral--and I wrote about FOOD--heh--visceral! :P

So--DRAW!!

But I'm not commanding.. you know... just lightly suggesting... :P