[Fic] drawn into

Nov 09, 2011 16:34

Title: drawn into
Author: analineblue
Fandom: No. 6
Pairing/Characters: Nezumi/Shion
Warnings/Spoilers: none
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~1,630
Summary: Shion thinks too much.

Notes: This is for Elanra over on ff.net, for being so sweet and encouraging. <3 This is also possibly the fluffiest fluff I’ve ever written, lol. I hope you enjoy it. ^_^

drawn into )

nezumi/shion, no.6, fic

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slowlyforget November 10 2011, 00:58:40 UTC
Absolutely beautiful.

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analineblue November 10 2011, 18:15:57 UTC
Thanks so much - I'm glad you enjoyed :)

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fencer_x November 10 2011, 01:07:30 UTC
*___* Jamiiiiiieeeee

This was absolutely beautiful (and I really wanted something simple and sweet but still really...thinky underneath, if that makes any sense XD)

I love how overwhelmed Shion is and how well you capture that. The little bouts of desperation where he just explodes and says things because he can't keep it bottled up anymore *____* Perfect!

(also, only slightly related, you should check out this tumblr, because it's seriously one of the most IC Nezumis I've ever read! I particularly like this one XD)

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analineblue November 10 2011, 18:38:03 UTC
OMG this tumblr is kind of amazing. *__* I love his snarky comments, lol. Like this. XDDD

But anyway, YAY! <3 I'm so glad you liked this. And you totally hit the nail on the head with Shion here~ I think this fic is mostly all about him being overwhelmed by the experience, which is one of the things that I think is so fun about writing him, maybe? I love that he can get overwhelmed by just about anything when it comes to Nezumi. <3

*goes back to reading this tumblr...forever* XD

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kaitou_marron November 11 2011, 02:44:04 UTC
It's nice to have something simple, sweet, and uncomplicated to read. (I really mean this as a good thing. *nodnod* Not everything needs to be as confusing as Penguindrum. XD;;) Soo, I really enjoyed the feeling of the fic. [/is bad at explaining]

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analineblue November 12 2011, 00:48:40 UTC
Thank you! I was trying to do something that was light and sweet and...without as much angst this time around. ;) I'm really glad you liked it. :D

(And I am SO glad that everything isn't as confusing as Penguindrum, lol. ^_~)

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inknose November 11 2011, 07:27:07 UTC
completely beautiful - I was not prepared for this story to be that touching when I started it, I almost teared up by the end :')

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analineblue November 12 2011, 00:50:09 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I'm happy you found it touching, too. <3

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roweena5000 November 11 2011, 13:34:54 UTC
OMG this is so sweet/cute and I love it. I love the bittersweet tone and how both of them seem to be struggling with the urgency to make the other happy, it suits them so well and I think you're doing a wonderful job with the characterization. It's -so- them.

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analineblue November 12 2011, 00:53:16 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm really happy to hear that the characterization worked here, especially. That was one thing I was a little worried about, with such a fluffy fic! ;)

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