[Fic] The Hour Runs Through

Aug 17, 2011 21:55

Title: The Hour Runs Through
Pairing/Characters: Ianto, Gwen, Rhys; implied Rhys/Gwen, Jack/Ianto
Warnings/Spoilers: None, takes place post S1, during The Year That Never Was
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~1,670
Beta: sariagray
Summary: Ianto and Gwen celebrate an anniversary of sorts, without Jack.

Notes: Written for redisourcolor's challenge #20. The theme is anniversary ( Read more... )

jack/ianto, torchwood, fic

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eldarwannabe August 18 2011, 05:29:03 UTC
Why am I awake? Clearly just to read this fic. Clearly. :)

And this was such a nice fic, warm and lovely. I like how the meal started out realistically awkward, and how Ianto wistfully thinks of the way things could have been while its Gwen who steps in and makes things happen determinedly. And it's always seemed logical that they would become friends during Jack's absence. :)

You used "full-stop!" Britishisms always make me smile.

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analineblue August 18 2011, 20:49:10 UTC
Clearly you're psychic! ^_~

And yay! I'm so glad you liked this, and that the awkwardness at the beginning made sense and felt realistic. I could definitely see Gwen pushing to make something like this happen, especially while Jack's gone.

And lol, yes! I try. :D (And then I trust you to let me know if I'm using them correctly or not! ^_~)

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eldarwannabe August 18 2011, 21:02:09 UTC
I ♥ good awkwardness in fics. And I can see Gwen spending a lot of time pushing the team together without Jack, which was probably a good idea for everyone.

(Don't trust me! I'm American! I don't know what I'm doing! >.> *hides from real Brits*)

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analineblue August 18 2011, 21:13:10 UTC
(Ahaha~ But you do know what you're doing! You taught me about courgettes after all! ^_~)

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remuslives23 August 18 2011, 06:59:13 UTC
Perfect! I was reccing you and sariagray to someone the other day and told them you both wrote the team perfectly and I was so right.

And I love the idea that Ianto and Rhys could have been friends. I think they would have been great mates if given the chance. And your blossoming Ianto/Gwen friendship was so lovely.

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analineblue August 18 2011, 20:50:33 UTC
*hugs* That's such a huge compliment - thank you. ;__; I've been in a bit of a writing slump lately, so it's really nice to know they still come off okay! ^_~

And I absolutely think Ianto and Rhys would make great mates. <3

So glad you liked this!

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reddevilpoes August 18 2011, 08:51:26 UTC
Always thought Ianto and Gwen could have been good friends as long as they didn't have any issues over Jack...

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analineblue August 18 2011, 20:51:21 UTC
*nods* Yeah, that's definitely how I see it, too. I'm glad it worked!

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mcparrot August 18 2011, 12:09:16 UTC
That I think, was how it would have been. Gwen and Ianto weren't rivals, and of all they team they had the most in common. Yeah, and Ianto and Rhys would have been mates.

Sad and lovely.

and now you need to write the pub quizz story. :-)
thanks

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analineblue August 18 2011, 20:53:31 UTC
That is really wonderful to hear. :) I can definitely see something like this happening, and so I'm glad to hear I'm not the only one!

Anyway, I'm really glad you liked this. And I'll have to think about the whole pub quiz idea. I bet Ianto'd be great! ;)

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aviv_b August 18 2011, 13:23:16 UTC
Very nice story!I wish we had gotten to see some glimpses of the team & rhys like this.

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analineblue August 18 2011, 20:54:17 UTC
I do too! I would have loved to see more interaction between them.

Thanks for reading - I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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