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analineblue

[Fic] A Blank Page

Mar 24, 2011 23:59

Title: A Blank Page
Pairing/Characters: Jack/Ianto
Warnings/Spoilers: takes place post-Exit Wounds, so spoilers through the end of S2
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~2060
Summary: Ianto visits his father's grave. Jack follows him.

Notes: This is a birthday fic for Sariagray! <3 It starts out a little dark, but gets better, I promise. ^_~

(x-posted to jackxianto, torch_wood[A ( Read more... )

jack/ianto, torchwood, fic

Comments 37

wanda1969 March 25 2011, 07:21:14 UTC

Wonderful! Love the conversation here- both so quiet really, but knowing what the other's about to say in the end.

analineblue March 28 2011, 02:36:55 UTC

Thank you so much! :) I definitely feel like even when they're a little disconnected like they are here, they still understand each other better than they think they do. ;)

fide_et_spe March 25 2011, 10:23:18 UTC

Lovely, I really like the mood swings, I could feel the anxiety, and then the calm. So very bittersweet.

analineblue March 28 2011, 02:38:52 UTC

Thank you! There were definitely some mood swings going on here, and I'm glad to hear that they felt real. :)

manikineko March 25 2011, 10:31:50 UTC

What a nice story, amazing how cold it felt at first with the cemetary and Ianto being all gloomy and how hot it suddenly became when they made out with each other :-) Best kiss-scene I've read in a while! <3

analineblue March 28 2011, 02:40:01 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm really glad you liked that kiss. <3 I'm glad you liked the contrast too, with the cemetery and then... what happened after. ;)

magikalrhiannon March 25 2011, 11:12:34 UTC

I really like this. I think it captures them well. Great job!

analineblue March 28 2011, 02:40:29 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

sariagray March 25 2011, 12:19:55 UTC

*Mad wild crazy flailing* OMG I...I love this. It's perfect. I'm glad you didn't scrap it for fluff! Ohmygosh. It was...it was just...there...Jack willing to break the rules. GUH. Oh, the poor things. And and and. *Keeps flailing*

Thank you! This was quite the way to wake up! So absolutely beautiful and wonderful and perfect. And the title and the future...ah!

*Stops rambling*

<3

analineblue March 28 2011, 03:12:16 UTC

Hee~ I somehow had a feeling that scrapping it for fluff just wouldn't have worked out as well. ;) Though I did keep saying to myself "Why are they in a cemetery?! What am I DOING?" for a while... Until I just decide to go with it. Also, strangely enough, I started this before you posted your RIOC fic in the cemetery, so... It would appear that we were both on the same wavelength randomly... Sort of... :P (You know what I mean. :P)

Anyway! I'm really, really happy that you liked it, and especially happy that you woke up to it as... that was part of my Secret Plan. :P I actually had finished it a few days before but was waiting to post it until it was officially your birthday here, and I was pretty sure you were already in bed so... Yeah. :P *is a dork* :P

♥