Whoa. This chapter was a rollercoaster ride! Gosh, where to start? K, Yunnie at the puter at the beginning all mad and cursing-I could feel his clenched fists! It was so cool! Somewhere in the words, my dear, you really pulled the tension into the story. If that makes a lick of sense. lol! And the thing of it is, you weave like a magician! I don't see you using long passages or complicated adjectives *coughslikemecough* but out of your words I can FEEL the emotion!!! How do you do it???
Yoochun-ah!!!!!! Dang. I love your Chunnie. When he reached out to get a drink of water, that line about the water feeling like the grace of God.......*cries* And then, as if that wasn't enough to make my heart go pitter-patter, Chunnie loses control and smashes the cup!!!
*faints*
And comes again is another example of the way you weave. Okay, there really has not been a great deal told about Chun and Junsu's relationship. BUT when Chun was up on stage and people were throwing questions at him and they asked about Junsu and his new album, I could feel the world spinning!!!
AND THEN YUNHO GRABBED HIS HAND AT THE END THAT WAS SO FRICKEN COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
y..you really think so? >////< ahh >//////< I'm sorry I think I've put too much action into this chap XD but I had to move it a bit - coz them two won;t do anything unless you puch them *looks at 2U* but heh I only hope it's readable nd if in any case it;s enjoyable then I can die happy!
heh I thought of what you said that Yunho is so angry all the time and well I thought I was loosing his anger but I happy it turned out ok ^^' I like him violent and angry I just do!! ahh my dear the only reason I don;t use such awesome sentence structure is just because I'm not that skilled in writing >.<' and my Engligh writing classes were WAY too long ago XD but thank you for your sweet words!! they mean A LOT to me!!
well Yoochun... I have to say you inspire me with your Yoochun! crazy huh? XD but you do!! and I want him so depressed so sad so unmotivated like your one!! so I hope I'm doing ok with this >.<'
ahh the YooSu part is going to be revealed during next chapter or two (if both of them will be willing to work with me!!!*glares at 2U again*). there is not alot to them but Chunnie god fected by this and I just ant to shiw how much. ahahaha how do you know it wa Yunho??!! XP yeah yeah I know it's so obvious ^^' but ahh it's such a cheesy idea but I couldn't help myself >.<'
thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so happy I wrote this chap (too bad the 12th chap is stuck on my dead laptop - -) and thank you again for all your nagging and pushing me to do it!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
wowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowow!!!!!
Whoa. This chapter was a rollercoaster ride! Gosh, where to start? K, Yunnie at the puter at the beginning all mad and cursing-I could feel his clenched fists! It was so cool! Somewhere in the words, my dear, you really pulled the tension into the story. If that makes a lick of sense. lol! And the thing of it is, you weave like a magician! I don't see you using long passages or complicated adjectives *coughslikemecough* but out of your words I can FEEL the emotion!!! How do you do it???
Yoochun-ah!!!!!! Dang. I love your Chunnie. When he reached out to get a drink of water, that line about the water feeling like the grace of God.......*cries* And then, as if that wasn't enough to make my heart go pitter-patter, Chunnie loses control and smashes the cup!!!
*faints*
And comes again is another example of the way you weave. Okay, there really has not been a great deal told about Chun and Junsu's relationship. BUT when Chun was up on stage and people were throwing questions at him and they asked about Junsu and his new album, I could feel the world spinning!!!
AND THEN YUNHO GRABBED HIS HAND AT THE END THAT WAS SO FRICKEN COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BRavo.
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this song reminds me of your fic! Lol!
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it is soft and longing and sad in a way.. thank you!!!
I'll make sure to bring more light into this fic coz it's getting gloomy XD
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ahh >//////<
I'm sorry I think I've put too much action into this chap XD but I had to move it a bit - coz them two won;t do anything unless you puch them *looks at 2U* but heh I only hope it's readable nd if in any case it;s enjoyable then I can die happy!
heh I thought of what you said that Yunho is so angry all the time and well I thought I was loosing his anger but I happy it turned out ok ^^' I like him violent and angry I just do!! ahh my dear the only reason I don;t use such awesome sentence structure is just because I'm not that skilled in writing >.<' and my Engligh writing classes were WAY too long ago XD but thank you for your sweet words!! they mean A LOT to me!!
well Yoochun... I have to say you inspire me with your Yoochun! crazy huh? XD but you do!! and I want him so depressed so sad so unmotivated like your one!! so I hope I'm doing ok with this >.<'
ahh the YooSu part is going to be revealed during next chapter or two (if both of them will be willing to work with me!!!*glares at 2U again*). there is not alot to them but Chunnie god fected by this and I just ant to shiw how much.
ahahaha how do you know it wa Yunho??!! XP yeah yeah I know it's so obvious ^^' but ahh it's such a cheesy idea but I couldn't help myself >.<'
thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm so happy I wrote this chap (too bad the 12th chap is stuck on my dead laptop - -)
and thank you again for all your nagging and pushing me to do it!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
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