Defining Gravity - Abby/Raven (The 100) - Part 2: Chapter 5 (of 7)

[ana_khouri]

Title: Defining Gravity
Fandom: The 100
Pairing: Abby/Raven (tiny bit of Raven/Wick in context..)
Spoilers: Up until the end of Season 2
Rating: M
Disclaimer: The bits from the show are not mine. The *feelings* and extra bits are...

Chapters 1 , 2, 3 & 4

Comments

[madame_denna]

This was sooooo lovely! And you left me heartbroken here. HEARTBROKEN! Ahhh there are so many parts that I loved. Raven telling Clarke, the kiss scene - so well written, you had me on the edge of my seat, the tension, the struggle. How am I supposed to let this go now?! I CAN'T!! This was wonderful. I hope against hope I will read the next chapter?! Yes/yes? Thank you very much for sharing.
You made my evening.

[ana_khouri]

So someone pointed out to me today that it's horribly bad form to not reply to comments and that, in the off chance we ever meet, I wouldn't want to have this be your impression of me. :-p

I absolutely love the excitment in this and am glad to hear how much you enjoyed it (it's great to reexperience it vicariously!).

Thank you so much for commenting (and I hope you enjoyed the rest!!).

;-)

[madame_denna]

One more thing: I was totally with Abby as Kane approached her, like - oh god here it comes - but then you just turned it around and it was the first time I like Kane (ever! - never forgave the shocklashing.. for gods sake..) But this was just perfect.. sorry I get carried away here.. uhm.
Did I say lovely? In case I didn't: Lovely!!

[ana_khouri]

Also I got you to not hate Kane! That is truly impressive!

And feel free to get carried away at any point - this is all so wonderful to read.

Now if we ever end up in some other fandom together (or two consecutively?) hopefully you will forgive such a dreadful oversight as how long it took me to respond to these... ;-p