Firefly fic: Miles from where you are (Mal, Inara, Crew, PG-13)

[ana_grrl]

Title: Miles from where you are
Characters: Inara, Mal, crew
Rating: PG-13
Words: About 2400
Summary: "She's late," Mal finally says.
Notes: Title from a line in the Snow Patrol song 'Set The Fire to the Third Bar'. Thank god for ozsaur for steering me along when I got lost with this. And for excellent suggestions and hand-holding.

Comments

[amonitrate]

oh. Lovely. I really like the sense of family you've captured. It's my favorite thing about Firefly, and it's wonderful here. As well as the hallucinations. I very much enjoyed it.

[ana_grrl]

I really like the sense of family you've captured

Oooh, thank you! That just makes my morning! I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Btw, your icon is lovely.

[dirty_diana]

This is so pretty, I really love the structure. And I am gong to imagine in my head that it is a Mal/Inara fic, so I hope that's okay. :)

[ana_grrl]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad the structure worked - I get a bit antsy writing alternating POVs, so yay!

And I am gong to imagine in my head that it is a Mal/Inara fic, so I hope that's okay

It's totally okay :D

[raincitygirl]

Oh, this is just NEAT.

[ana_grrl]

Thank you!

[runpunkrun]

Ooh, I like the back and forth between the warmth and laughter of Serenity and Inara's cold confusion, and the slow unravelling of the plot. Great last lines, too.

[ana_grrl]

Thank you so much! I'm especially happy you like the last lines!

[lunabee34]

This is so atmospheric. I feel like we're watching the story unfold through a layer of gauze. Lovely.

[ana_grrl]

I feel like we're watching the story unfold through a layer of gauze.

Wow, that's so cool! Thank you :D