Comments | ana_grrl: SG-1 fic: Integration (PG-13; Cameron Mitchell)

ana_grrl

SG-1 fic: Integration (PG-13; Cameron Mitchell)

Nov 17, 2006 08:39

Title: Integration
Characters/Pairings: Cameron Mitchell (some Cameron/Martouf)
Rating: PG-13
Words: About 2900
Summary: Learning to live with (as) a Tok'ra.
Notes: I owe a lot to rydra_wong re: this fic. Several of the scenes came about during a chat, when she was encouraging about things I was trying out, and also kicked my ass (with suggestions!) to make ( Read more... )

au, sg1 fic

Comments 29

janedavitt November 17 2006, 14:00:09 UTC

Oh, this was fascinating and so intriguing. Love this slightly distant look at the people we know and Cameron... doesn't, not quite. Makes it very poignant.

You really captured the oddness and the adjustment of carrying a symbiote.

ana_grrl November 18 2006, 01:57:30 UTC

Thank you :D

You really captured the oddness and the adjustment of carrying a symbiote.

That just makes my day! Especially since this thing has been sitting around for months, unfinished, and I despaired that it would ever get done. Thank you again!

rydra_wong November 17 2006, 14:15:31 UTC

Posted, yay! And I really like the tweaks, they add a bit more edge.

ana_grrl November 18 2006, 01:58:26 UTC

Eee! Yay! I'm glad they worked. And I just couldn't work in the Sam/Martouf suggestion, just I decided to drop it :(

Thank you again for all of your help/encouragement/suggestions on this!

rydra_wong November 18 2006, 15:33:30 UTC

No worries - I'm sure not dying allowed him lots of time to get over her *g*.

ana_grrl November 18 2006, 19:32:27 UTC

I'm sure not dying allowed him lots of time to get over her

I'm just pretending that in this 'verse, Sam was dating Janet and never even showed any interest in Martouf/Lantash. :)

lyrstzha November 17 2006, 14:44:01 UTC

Oh, hey! It's so cool to see more of this 'verse---it's a really intriguing scenario. I especially enjoyed the relationship between Tekesh and Cameron, though I also liked the very human, suspicious reactions of the Earth government to the blended personnel. Because I do believe it would happen just like that, if not worse.

ana_grrl November 18 2006, 01:59:45 UTC

Because I do believe it would happen just like that, if not worse

I'm glad it's not just me who is cynical ;) And so happy that you liked this (that it was interesting and not boring, lol).

Thank you!

jakisbishlygay November 17 2006, 23:00:21 UTC

Wow - and that's really all I can say... this was weird (in a good way, a really, really good way)

ana_grrl November 18 2006, 02:00:11 UTC

Weird in a good way = glee! Thank you :D

jakisbishlygay November 18 2006, 04:26:03 UTC

=) Your welcome

_minxy_ November 18 2006, 05:23:43 UTC

Oooooooh, I love how.. how *stubborn* they are. I love that Jack has his biases, I love that he's a puppet for the politicians.

I love that the decision is so painful for all the Tok'ra blendeds, Martouf included.

AWESOME. And RW is always that brilliant.

ana_grrl November 18 2006, 16:04:50 UTC

I love that the decision is so painful for all the Tok'ra blendeds, Martouf included

Eee! Thank you, thank you (and thank you for the awesome rec on your journal, too!). I'm so glad this thing was enjoyable. And that Jack's biases work! :D