Outline Stuff - "TENC"
Firefly "The Emperor's New Clothes" tentative outline thing
Rayne
Here. The meager bits I have planned. Sort of. I think "plan" is a strong word. (I'm ready for today to be over. Heh.)
Stuff That Needs to Happen:
-I need to decide what happens in the end. How does the rest of the crew find out? When does River realize Simon knows? I don't know!
Bah. Okay, so I need to get a full out outline for this thing. I know what basically happens, but I don't have things pinned down. And I need to have a few more incidences to fill space. Yup. NEED TO FINISH CHAPTER FOUR! (I think I'm going to do that today... Possibly tomorrow, depending.) I'm going to finish something. Soon. (I hope.)
On another note, I SERIOUSLY need to work on "Out of Sight". And the episode of "Chuck" last night? Casey's HAIR. Whiskey Tango Foxtrot, guys. That... That... Why?
Rayne
Here. The meager bits I have planned. Sort of. I think "plan" is a strong word. (I'm ready for today to be over. Heh.)
Stuff That Needs to Happen:
- "fashion show" of men - four, I think, at first; DEFINITELY Chapter Four
- River gets jealous of Jayne having to flirt with a woman (or something comparable) on a job - maybe chapter six
- Jayne knows that Kaylee's pregnant before anyone else (because River knows) - maybe chapter six or seven?
- Simon confronts Jayne about the relationship - maybe chapter eight
- Jayne's "make-over" - probably chapters nine and ten or so
-I need to decide what happens in the end. How does the rest of the crew find out? When does River realize Simon knows? I don't know!
Bah. Okay, so I need to get a full out outline for this thing. I know what basically happens, but I don't have things pinned down. And I need to have a few more incidences to fill space. Yup. NEED TO FINISH CHAPTER FOUR! (I think I'm going to do that today... Possibly tomorrow, depending.) I'm going to finish something. Soon. (I hope.)
On another note, I SERIOUSLY need to work on "Out of Sight". And the episode of "Chuck" last night? Casey's HAIR. Whiskey Tango Foxtrot, guys. That... That... Why?