Re: After this, not even air condition helps ;)an_ardent_rainAugust 8 2008, 02:13:40 UTC
I appreciate very much you trying to give a helpful comment - very much indeed - but really anything is more than acceptable. I'm glad you thought that I made the right decision by leaving the more explicit stuff out. I was really unsure about that.
And MAN - I'm glad the smut-part is okay. I am really a very generous person, but almost nothing can ruin a story for me like a tasteless/poorly-written/etc. sex scene. Yuck.
Hmm - I hadn't ever considered doing more with this, but you're right - a comparison or something of the sort would be pretty awesome. Heh. Now I'm all thinking and I want to do something with that. Hmm... Maybe I will! Who was it that said art's never finished, just given up on? Heh.
And I actually might add that little bit in. When I re-read over it I came to the part that said he looked as though he were a starving wolf salivating over a fresh, bloody slab of meat and I was like "WTF was I thinking?" but... meh, I did not know how else to convey what I wanted to. Er, sort of.
Anyway! Thanks again for the feedback! Man, I just love getting people's thoughts about my stuff, so I am always in favor of detailedly explained opinions. Hee. :)
And MAN - I'm glad the smut-part is okay. I am really a very generous person, but almost nothing can ruin a story for me like a tasteless/poorly-written/etc. sex scene. Yuck.
Hmm - I hadn't ever considered doing more with this, but you're right - a comparison or something of the sort would be pretty awesome. Heh. Now I'm all thinking and I want to do something with that. Hmm... Maybe I will! Who was it that said art's never finished, just given up on? Heh.
And I actually might add that little bit in. When I re-read over it I came to the part that said he looked as though he were a starving wolf salivating over a fresh, bloody slab of meat and I was like "WTF was I thinking?" but... meh, I did not know how else to convey what I wanted to. Er, sort of.
Anyway! Thanks again for the feedback! Man, I just love getting people's thoughts about my stuff, so I am always in favor of detailedly explained opinions. Hee. :)
-ILB
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