So! Spawned from sheer boredom...

[an_ardent_rain]

Yugioh   chapter twenty-one outline
Seto/Anzu

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-The 1st Scene: Well, this is the lunch with Yugi I mentioned in chapter nineteen.  They all go out, tra-la, tra-la, for a delicious lunch.  And this is when Yugi breaches the whole "I slept with your girlfriend while you two were broken up, but it will never be spoken of again" agreement - which

Comments

[vhsgooey]

ohh this sounds like a fun chapter.
Awkwardness, hints at infidelity, then romance. Phwee! heh heh heh. If you want a mood killer for anzu you can have Seto say soemthing about his dragon starting to get blue eyed. *laughs*

[an_ardent_rain]

Um...

No, actually. I'm quite happy with what I already have planned, thanks. If you'd like to write that, go ahead, but personally I think it would be a more-fun-to-read chapter if the mood WASN'T killed.

I'm glad you think it's fun, though.

[vhsgooey]

It was actually meant as a joke.... When I say things like that i'm not really thinking you should put it in there. It's your story not mine, i don't write stories. I just liked the idea of the chapter so much that i was thinking about it and came up with soemthing i thought was funny, so i thought i'd share it. I don't know if you got it or not, beacuse i don't know if you're aware of the term blue balls, but i was mixing that with kaiba's blue eyes fixation.

[an_ardent_rain]

About ten minutes after I replied to your first comment, I finally got what you meant.

>.

[an_ardent_rain]

My squinty face didn't show up.

Well, I meant to convey that I am S-L-O-W.

[vhsgooey]

You no slow, just not as perverted as me.