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Well. I finally sat down and did some more work on my fic "A Taste of Desire". Heh. Yeah, I actually said it. I neglect that one BAD. Heh. But anyway - this introduces some more good stuff. Ooh, and my favorite original character, Snake. He's cool. Heh. So... I'm hoping to get this up tomorrow so I won't post it all. Here's a snippet! *beam*
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Snake grabbed his arm. “Whoa there, weary traveler- such earnest retreat speaks on its own. And I happen to be traveling your way, so stroll with me for a brief moment of shared reflection.”
Bender looked ahead to the others, but they were talking and laughing and hadn’t even noticed that the two had fallen behind. “What do you want, Snake?”
“My motives are pure.” He stopped for a moment and looked Bender over, studying him closely. Then, abruptly he said, “That’s a real diamond. But only one? I simply must ask- where’d you make such a find?”
Bender got defensive immediately. “What the hell does it matter, Snake? I didn’t steal it, if that’s what you’re wondering.”
Snake shrugged. “Merely searching for connections. I can’t help but think that this new earring might have once belonged to another. Was it a gift, perhaps? And from whom?” He blinked. “Someone... worth your time?”
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YAH! I really like this chapter. Well... Ok, there's one part I hate but I love THIS part. Heh. Hopefully I'll finish this up soon! Yup.
-ILB
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Snake grabbed his arm. “Whoa there, weary traveler- such earnest retreat speaks on its own. And I happen to be traveling your way, so stroll with me for a brief moment of shared reflection.”
Bender looked ahead to the others, but they were talking and laughing and hadn’t even noticed that the two had fallen behind. “What do you want, Snake?”
“My motives are pure.” He stopped for a moment and looked Bender over, studying him closely. Then, abruptly he said, “That’s a real diamond. But only one? I simply must ask- where’d you make such a find?”
Bender got defensive immediately. “What the hell does it matter, Snake? I didn’t steal it, if that’s what you’re wondering.”
Snake shrugged. “Merely searching for connections. I can’t help but think that this new earring might have once belonged to another. Was it a gift, perhaps? And from whom?” He blinked. “Someone... worth your time?”
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YAH! I really like this chapter. Well... Ok, there's one part I hate but I love THIS part. Heh. Hopefully I'll finish this up soon! Yup.
-ILB