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Dec 18, 2008 21:06

Title: “Abandon”
Format: Vignette
Word Count: 200
Notes: For Andie, who brings out the artsy in me. Beware of pseudo-adverbs and other curiosities.

She would never know what possessed her. )

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iprefernoise December 19 2008, 02:16:21 UTC
*applauds* Beautiful! I love it- it completely captures the photo I sent you. I especially loved this:

"Time stilled, seized, and
slowly-fixedly-
bit-by-bittedly
she wound
herself
up."

Because... I'm a sucker for cool formatting, and it's insanely artsy. ♥ ♥

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prosopopeya December 19 2008, 03:53:39 UTC
......... wow

I'm really jealous okay

No really this really is artsy but not in that EXCUSE ME HELLO I AM BEING ARTSY NOW way. It's much more just... idk, really, really cool, in that super imaginative creative way that I'm jealous of. So there. :\

I love love love how poetic it is and how... different. A++++++++

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freckleface1002 December 21 2008, 01:48:56 UTC
wow amy...this is awesome! i love it :-)

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