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[amyross]

The Doctor’s feeling brighter than he has for quite some time. He doesn’t share the need that the Master has, to be in control of every situation, dominating every person in the room. He’s never understood the satisfaction the Master seems to gain from forcing others under his will. What does loyalty or obedience mean if it is done through fear,

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Author Note

[amyross]

I just wanted to leave a comment saying, I'm sorry this one's so short. I wanted all of Ch2 to happen outside the TARDIS, but I had all these loose ends to tie up. I actually only got five hours sleep last night because I wanted to do this instead *rolleyes*

Also, I was a bit bummed last night because of the series news, so naturally my creativity was a little stunted, to put it politely. Actually my peripheral vision went dark for a few moments.

I plan to finish the chapter, or at least write a really long, out-of-the-TARDIS part tonight.

Thanks everybody.

[amyross]

I dunno, that may have been where I got it from. The image and the sentence were in my head, but I didn't know where from. It's a similar sort of tone I was going for, only with a little more surprise.

[violateviolet]

Oh, I loved this!

It's so in character I can hear them speaking the words...and doing the actions *nudge nudge wink wink* too ;)

[amyross]

Thank you so much!

"In-characterness" and voices are important to me. I write IRL, but mostly scripts, not prose, so the voices have to be everything. I love writing prose, where things can be put into narrative. I've not done it for years.

Apologies for the next part taking so very yawningly long. I broke my wrist on Friday so I spent most of the weekend in a hospital waiting room. At the moment, one-handed typing is taking a long time, but the ideas are flowing! Shouldn't be long now.

Ta :)