El Corazon (5/10)

[amygirl]

El Corazon (5/10)
Author: Amy
Pairing: Orlibean
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Never happened. This has been adapted from the movie Romancing the Stone - it does not belong to me no harm is meant and no money is being made.
Beta: The lovely giselleslash all remaining mistakes are mine

Comments

[koulagirl666]

Y'know, for an "action" scene that wasn't too bad. Orlando's quite cute when the only thing he can think equates to 'what the hell?' and Sean really does seem like a nice guy even if he's surprised that he gives that impression.

[amygirl]

Writing actions suuuucks...bleh.

LOL...well Sean just likes to pretend he's not a nice guy to scare people away because he doesn't want to deal with them because they cause trouble.

Too bad he's stumbled upon a walking Hurricane with Orlando.

Re: El Corazon (5/10

[amygirl]

LOL...nope I think things are really only going to get more troublesome for him... *nods*

Glad you're enjoying it, thanks for the comment! :-)

[amygirl]

Thanks dear...glad you're still enjoying it.

Yeah it's kind of daunting knowing that lots of people love the original and I'm just hoping that on some level mine can live up to that.

[amygirl]

Well if there's one thing that Elijah has tried to impart on him it's that money is a good thing and Orlando has plenty of it to throw around if he wants too. And yeah I wanted it to be that way...as a writer Orlando has good insites into people and what makes them tick even if he doesn't often turn that insite on himself.

Thanks...I'll have to go back and correct that both G and I missed it apparently... :-)

[foxrafer]

I am so enjoying this story.

[amygirl]

Thanks dear, glad you are! :-)