Home Game - Week 39 - first time participant!

[amphigori]

"Take my hand. Take my hand and come with me. Now. I can give you everything we've ever wanted. I can make every 'what-if' become real. We can be together, forever. Like you've always wanted. Like we've always wanted

Comments

[crisp_sobriety]

This is so lovely and creative. I really enjoyed this!

[amphigori]

Thank you for reading and commenting! It was a good exercise to try and whack something together in the half hour I had before bed! I can see the appeal of lj idol - it'd be a great means to keep writing regularly.

[anonymous]

Phew! Am so glad it wasn't a sappy love story. I really enjoyed this. I liked the flow of the piece. I t makes me wonder what you would've done had you an hour or more!

LJI really does get one to write on a regular basis. My daughter got me 'into the game' this season. You should sign up for when we talk our Overlord into season 10. :)

[clauderainsrm]

I'm already talked into it. (unless circumstances change)

It's just a matter of it there will be one mini-season before it or two.

[dmousey]

Don't know why my message above says anonymous. My only explanation is I'm a techno clutz, I probably double tapped the wrong key. One of these times I'm going to do that, and the floor is going to open up and swallow me, letting out a lusty burp without an "excuse me" afterward.

[jexia]

Haha, I worked out who the anon was even before I read your next comment!

Nice job, amphigori. I'm so glad you did this!

[dmousey]

:) Am not sure if that's a good or bad thing! (Laughing)

[ext_2828400]

When fairy tales go bad...

Awesome story, great plot development! :-)