HEY! THIS IS THE BIG OH!!!
Man is life something else.
Anyways, I'm trying to write a song, its partially about a cute couple from minnesota, and what I'd imagine them doing, and partially how I'd like to live. Kind of. But here's what I got. and What I want is some suggestion on what else i could write about in it, because I am having severe writer's block.
I imagine you and I
Sitting on a roof downtown
Staring at the starry sky
And eating dumpstered food we found
The walls behind the grocery store
Were canvas of a different form
We'd sleep under the bridge
On Winneconne
If caught in a storm
I'm finished with routine
It's MY life, and my life is ME
My father was a slave to an "American Dream"
So I think I'm gonna learn from history
Anyways, that's all just little ideas clumped into stanzas. nothing for sure yet. But give me suggestions if you know me or go to my school or care at all. which may be a total of a person or two, but whatever. I might even take out that whole last stanza. something about it is irritating me. maybe the rhyming scheme.
ALSO!
Show!
Saturday, May 21st!
@ a PARTYHOUSE! 1240B Second Street - Steven's Point
8:00 pm CHEAP!
This is Mary, from Nobody's Housewife's birthday thing I believe. so dumpster her something good.
playing w/
NOBODY'S HOUSEWIFE
THE MODERN MACHINES
BOB BURNS AND THE BREAKUPS
THE HAMBURGERS
PARTY DOWN WOO HOO!!
yeah definitly that last stanza makes me wanna puke. i gotta do something with it.
Anyways, I'm trying to write a song, its partially about a cute couple from minnesota, and what I'd imagine them doing, and partially how I'd like to live. Kind of. But here's what I got. and What I want is some suggestion on what else i could write about in it, because I am having severe writer's block.
I imagine you and I
Sitting on a roof downtown
Staring at the starry sky
And eating dumpstered food we found
The walls behind the grocery store
Were canvas of a different form
We'd sleep under the bridge
On Winneconne
If caught in a storm
I'm finished with routine
It's MY life, and my life is ME
My father was a slave to an "American Dream"
So I think I'm gonna learn from history
Anyways, that's all just little ideas clumped into stanzas. nothing for sure yet. But give me suggestions if you know me or go to my school or care at all. which may be a total of a person or two, but whatever. I might even take out that whole last stanza. something about it is irritating me. maybe the rhyming scheme.
ALSO!
Show!
Saturday, May 21st!
@ a PARTYHOUSE! 1240B Second Street - Steven's Point
8:00 pm CHEAP!
This is Mary, from Nobody's Housewife's birthday thing I believe. so dumpster her something good.
playing w/
NOBODY'S HOUSEWIFE
THE MODERN MACHINES
BOB BURNS AND THE BREAKUPS
THE HAMBURGERS
PARTY DOWN WOO HOO!!
yeah definitly that last stanza makes me wanna puke. i gotta do something with it.