1 one-shot: Rangiku/Orihime

[amorphous]

Title: Beginning
Words: circa 2000
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Rangiku/Orihime
Warnings: femmeslash, spoilers for The Arrancar/Bount arc
Prompt: "jolt!" table
Summary: This was only the beginning for Rangiku and Orihime.

Comments

[myojo_s_me]

Wheeew that was HAWT.
Totally, enourmously hawt. *drools*

Rangiku is such a sin of a woman, and you wrote Hime really cute^^ YOu described her insecureness and everything really well. In the beginning she seemed a little bit too... experienced or do *cannot really say it* but the second and third part was just great. *nodnod*

"The silent question of if she did well made Rangiku want to laugh. " So cute !!!!! *fangirls over Hime*

Btw... there were some minor spelling mistakes o.o I guess you proofread, but maybe a beta would have seen it... dunno...

[close_ur_eyes91]

DANG, that was Hawt, i agree wiv myojo_s_me you captured the characters really well, That was brilliant femslash :P

[anonymous]

omg that was crazy i almost came just reading it but omg u need to right a book ( with a extra proof read though) ☆ awesome job though !