Fic: The Priming Game - Iron Man, 3/3

Jul 12, 2008 14:07

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Title: The Priming Game, 3/3
Summary: Rhodey wonders if from now on it's going to be Tony Before and Tony After.
Notes: something of a prequel to "Sentinel" but it stands alone.

At 1900 Lefferts calls Rhodey into his office. Tony's been in custody for fifteen hours, most of that in interrogation. When Rhodey is ushered inside the general ( Read more... )

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ithildyn July 12 2008, 19:29:48 UTC
I lied. I'm still here.

[APPLAUDS]

That was so good I don't even know where to start, so I won't. When I get back home, I'm going to read it all over again.

Thank you!

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amonitrate July 12 2008, 19:33:38 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it.

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agilebrit July 12 2008, 19:48:04 UTC
Wow, this is just painful and real and oh-so-Tony. Holy cow. Well done.

I need to go find some fluff now. Seriously.

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amonitrate July 13 2008, 23:52:44 UTC
thanks!!

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lizbet0 July 12 2008, 20:09:16 UTC
Oh wow. Just wow.

Jeez, I need a thesaurus for synonyms of marvelous, fabulous, perfect, etc. because I keep having to use them for all this fantabulous writing!

Just amazing! Thank you so much!

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amonitrate July 13 2008, 23:52:30 UTC
thank you!

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eumelia July 12 2008, 20:13:15 UTC
I just read all three chapters and I have to say I started crying.
This was beautiful and so spot on.

I have PTSD and it's really rare to see it written with such sensitivity and accuracy.

Thank you.

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amonitrate July 13 2008, 23:52:08 UTC
Thank you. That's really nice to hear, I've tried to be realistic and respectful about it, so it's gratifying that it works for you.

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deiseach July 12 2008, 21:12:21 UTC

This is very, very good. Filling in the gaps between 'being found' and 'coming home', and setting up the events to come in "Sentinel".

And we finally found out why you wanted to blow up a hospital ;-)

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amonitrate July 13 2008, 23:51:05 UTC
Yeah, this whole thing started off as me trying to get some things in place in my mind for Sentinel. Rhodey's POV, and some background on Tony.

Really glad you liked it.

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