Fic: Sentinel, part III - Iron Man

[amonitrate]

Okay. It's amazing how many of the ideas I was discussing in a thread of doom with

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[quigonejinn]

THE TENSION BETWEEN TONY AND RHODEY. OMG.

Seriously. That alone would make it worth it, but I seriously made this retarded squeaking noise when I realized how cleverly you were playing it out. And the way you describe the suits. And how well you convey the texture of Pepper's job. And.

And agreed with dafnap of the Hive Mind. We want more stories about Yinsen. We want many, many more stories about Yinsen.

[amonitrate]

thanks! I really worked hard on that tension, it went through about three drafts before it worked. I'm happy you liked it!

I want more stories about Yinsen too. If I wasn't working on this I'd love to work on a story about Yinsen and Tony in the cave.

[quigonejinn]

GAH. By dafnap, I mean gabby_silang. Man, I am full of the suck (and the hive brain.)

[sienamystic]

Yes, yes we do. Immediately.

I'd write more coherently but instead I think I'll just *flail* since I'm so in love with this story.

[amonitrate]

thank yoU!

[besyd]

We want more stories about Yinsen.

I third that!