Comments | amonitrate: The Unnameable

amonitrate

The Unnameable

Feb 17, 2006 13:05

Written for the "silence" challenge on writers_choice. Thanks to Hmph for a quick read and valuable comments, despite her lack of sleep.

( He rides the metro at night. )

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Comments 11

cyberducks February 20 2006, 04:52:28 UTC

You are twisting my gut with this. The restlessness of loss and mourning...

amonitrate February 20 2006, 05:02:27 UTC

Hey, instant feedback! The best kind. I just couldn't get the image of Methos riding the metro out of my brain until I wrote this.

Pretty soon I'm going to have to let poor Methos get on with the mourning, but I'm having too much fun with him right now.

lastrega February 20 2006, 05:16:46 UTC

Wow, this is really real and enormously affecting. Thank you.

amonitrate February 20 2006, 05:24:06 UTC

thank you! glad you liked it

buffyangellvr23 February 20 2006, 05:45:20 UTC

Nice work. *hugs Methos*

amonitrate February 20 2006, 16:40:40 UTC

thanks!

ardienne February 20 2006, 10:14:25 UTC

This is wrenching. It makes the reader ache for him. It's so real so in the present. Wonderful.

amonitrate February 20 2006, 16:41:36 UTC

I'm glad it feels like the present, that's what I was aiming for. Thanks for reading!

holde_maid February 21 2006, 08:54:07 UTC

Perfect.

amonitrate February 21 2006, 13:50:06 UTC

thanks!