Fic: And in the afterwards... (Miami Vice)

[amonitrate]

This is something I've been noodling with for awhile. Thought it might go further, but I kind of like the stopping point I have now.

And in the afterwards...
Post-Redemption in Blood

“What's it gonna be, lieutenant?” Sonny said with more bravado than he felt. Castillo looked up at him with that way he had that told you he wasn't in the mood for

Comments

[dejla]

Good. Works well in context, and the pov works and holds very well.

Waiting for the next part now...

[amonitrate]

hey, thanks! I don't know if there will be more. But knowing me this will turn into another series. grr.

[dejla]

That was fast!!

Know what you mean. I never intended the Holby City thing to turn into more than one scene. Now I have 30 pages and I am banging my head against the wall.

[amonitrate]

heh. I haven't had a chance to read that one; I haven't seen any Holby City yet either.

[dejla]

Well, I just finished a 26-page sex scene. With a plot. Go me! I don't mind writing them, but it's just -- I have to stop reading how to write entries while I'm writing because inevitably I start thinking I'm doing it all wrong. And then you read anything about writing sex and you start cringing because you're certain that the sex scene you wrote is going to be unintentionally hilarious and what words do you use for what and -- eh. You know.

And I want to get back and finish the other things I'm working on. Bah!

And I shouldn't be complaining when you're having writer's pause. I commiserate.

[amonitrate]

ah, it's more like writer's lazy. It'll go away if I would just sit down and concentrate.