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amonitrate

WIP amnesty

Feb 17, 2007 15:23

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giandujakiss February 17 2007, 22:38:54 UTC

This is so well done! I particularly love that first meeting between Mulder and Methos - you're great at writing action-ish sequences.

amonitrate February 21 2007, 03:28:00 UTC

thank you! I love those two guys. I'd love to write them together. Alas, I never came up with a plot. That, and I've forgotten most of what I knew about how to write Mulder.

juniperphoenix February 17 2007, 23:01:06 UTC

Oooooh, shiny! This piece is very atmospheric: the alley feels all dark and wet and grungy. And you always write Methos so well. You have a knack for bringing out his various qualities without making it seem like he has multiple personality disorder (a fanfic convention which annoys me to no end).

And poor dear Mulder is completely out of his league. :)

Thanks for posting this!

amonitrate February 21 2007, 03:29:18 UTC

thank you. Yes, MPD!Methos is a pet peeve of mine, too. RIght up there with Amnesia!SLave!Methos.

I'm not knocking amnesia, of course. Not after my four part Miami Vice Amnesia Ep Love Fest.

I'm glad you liked it.

keerawa February 17 2007, 23:20:08 UTC

Actually, the first part makes a perfectly acceptable stand-alone. Mulder has had plenty of unsolved mysteries in his case book, why not this one?

I love the way that Mulder thinks Methos looks young, but with an assassin's gaze that reminds him of Krycek.

amonitrate February 21 2007, 03:30:10 UTC

that's true. I Guess it could stand alone. I dunno.

Mulder's a pretty perceptive guy. I think he'd catch on pretty quick that something wasn't quite right about this dude. Even without the alley.

dswdiane February 18 2007, 21:42:22 UTC

Very nicely done. Do you plan to leave it a WIP? I'd love to know what happens.

amonitrate February 21 2007, 03:30:53 UTC

Thanks! For now, alas, it will remain a WIP. I have too manyother more current WIPS living in my brain. Maybe someday.

I'd love to know what happens too.

Gah! hmpf November 24 2007, 11:47:12 UTC

Why do you have to be like me, with all the no-progress works -in-progress? *frustrated*

This is very good, and very intriguing, and I *want* more of it, dammit! ;-) (I really do, but I know what it's like to have too many WiPs to tend to.)

Re: Gah! amonitrate November 24 2007, 15:08:56 UTC

thank you!!!

I like it too, I just don' tknow what to do with it. grrrrr.