Comments | ammazzacaffe: immortal days, in a time when homesickness is sweet as honey;

inuyashacooks in ammazzacaffe

immortal days, in a time when homesickness is sweet as honey;

Jan 25, 2010 03:56

so here we have 3 sketches, and 3 poems (and half a poem, but that's for explanation); the sketches utilize a format that occurs naturally, but has its justification in that i've seen it used by both TS Eliot and Pablo Neruda- poem in prose, i guess. some of them are prolly weird. all written under a spell. and here ( Read more... )

☆poetry, ☆original

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langus_fiction January 25 2010, 13:53:37 UTC

Fantastic work as usual :) I really enjoyed "The Way Cologne Tricks You Is". It was so visual. I think that's one of my favourite things about your writing. You don't seem to see the world as plain as other people.

inuyashacooks January 25 2010, 19:14:17 UTC

:DDD I'm glad you liked it! yeah out of the three first ones I have the feeling that one makes the most sense XD and thank you so much :) (I kinda have the feeling that people don't see the world plain as they let on, they just can't express it.)

tupelo_thief January 26 2010, 00:52:59 UTC

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inuyashacooks January 26 2010, 00:56:58 UTC

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faerichylde January 26 2010, 03:11:43 UTC

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So I saw this before school and was going to comment, but then I had to leave.

Another reason to hate XD

But THIS WAS SO AMAZING I CAN'T EVEN SAY.

The three sketches were absolute GENIUS like OMIF-INGGOD, but I especially liked the last one, Back in the Desert. Felt very nostalgic to me because being 14, i know all about nostalgia, mhm

and then the POETRY DEAR GOD, YOU'RE KILLING ME.

I'mma be sittin' in class one day, bored out of my mind and then I'mma suddenly start quoting random lines from ur poetry, can't even say how true this is. Like I'll just be like "True that you're my endless queen..." and everybody'll be like "well ok, we knew she was weird but not this weird, she sure is an oddity."

SPEAKING OF QUOTING. I printed out four of your Spamano fics and took them to school so I can read them when I get bored. They're in my accordion folder right now XD Except for Aquellos Ojos Verdes which is in my wallet and is WAY TOO ( ... )

inuyashacooks January 26 2010, 03:29:09 UTC

don't be sorry, I like really really mundo appreciate it :OOO like its so cool that you like em :D I can't say thankyou enough :'DDD so awesome ahhhhhhh

...i should do that :O I should print out all the ossimest fics and like read them on the train and stuff 8D (damn you have a good memory btw. I forgot I even wrote that XDDD)

hahahaha and then they'll be like "what are you talking about?!" and then you go "THE HEART B|" and kick over the desk and shoot rainbows out your fingers XDD then the whole school turns into a figure skating troupe okay sorry ill stop now.

but really. thank you again :'D

also you sound older than 14 :/ well to me at least.

faerichylde January 26 2010, 06:00:39 UTC

yeah but i feel like i should leave coherent comments instead of long keyboard smashes XD

INORITE, i got the idea from sumbuddy who said that they printed a fic out and put it in their science binder so it looked like they were studying notes when they weren't XD i was like THAT IS SO OSSIM WATTA COOL IDEA I'M STEALING THAT. so i did.

oh man. figure skating troupe... some of the guys in my class would look so bad in figure skating costumes.... /dies from the imagery

but that was funny!

do i really? thx! people say that but then people here aren't exactly mature, yanno. altho we are high schoolers after all. i guess nobody can really say anything b/c we're so young anyway.