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amles80

The Rain Makes the Pain Grow Stronger

Oct 29, 2009 13:54

Title: The Rain Makes the Pain Grow Stronger
Fandom: Heroes
Rating/Genre: PG/femslash
Characters/Pairing: Elle Bishop/Angela Petrelli (one-sided)
Summary: Angela thinks that Elle, as she’s growing up and isn’t a child anymore, needs a mother figure more than ever. Elle has something else in mind.
Word count: 1 588
Spoilers/Warnings: No.
Notes: ( Read more... )

prompt: heroes_contest, character: elle bishop, character: angela petrelli, genre: femslash, pairing: angela/elle, !fanfic, rating: pg, length: oneshot, *fandom: heroes

Comments 29

eternal_moonie October 29 2009, 13:29:31 UTC

totally love it! Well done! AWESOME fic!

amles80 October 29 2009, 13:40:50 UTC

Thank you very much!

firstlady1408 October 29 2009, 14:55:41 UTC

Great fic, Im still not totally sold on Angela slash, but you write it in a way that makes me love it ;-) &hearts

amles80 November 1 2009, 14:18:21 UTC

Oh, that's a huge compliment, thank you! :)

cruiscin_lan October 29 2009, 15:56:25 UTC

Wow, I really loved this.

Also, I think you're fine with PG, since there's nothing explicitly sexual about what's happening.

amles80 November 1 2009, 15:07:32 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

And thanks for answering my question. :)

anansie_s October 29 2009, 17:12:07 UTC

Oooh. This was a great mix of peaceful, weird (not in a bad way) and surreal, with the rain/water imagery you use.

I like your take on Elle, and I can see her wanting to latch onto a mother figure in this way. And that her normal brashness might not translate to romantic-type relationships/feelings, especially with someone so ... Angela-ish.

amles80 November 1 2009, 15:13:29 UTC

Thank you! Peaceful/weird is what I like to aim at sometimes; I'm glad to hear that I managed to do that. :)

And I'm glad you like my take on Elle; this was the first time I tried to write about her.

anansie_s February 26 2010, 20:00:58 UTC

yay! did you know that you won a heroes_slash award for this story?

amles80 February 28 2010, 17:54:32 UTC

No, I didn't know that!! (Now I remember that I was nominated, but I had forgotten...) Thank you för telling me, that makes me very happy! :D

sparkswill_fly October 29 2009, 19:41:46 UTC

I was not prepared for that scene. And, you kept Angela in character nicely. But, you still let her show her range of emotion! And, I liked that! I loved Elle too! Good fic!!!

amles80 November 1 2009, 15:17:41 UTC

Thank you; I was afraid that it was going to be predictable. I feel quite comfortable writing about Angela, but I was a little nervous about Elle, seeing that she's one of the more popular characters...