Fic for reddorozette (5/5)

[producer_kun]

Title: Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow {5/5}
Written for: reddorozette
Pairing: pikame (& a bit of ryokame)
Words: 36 427
Rating: PG-15? (somewhere between PG-13 and R)
Notes: thank you very much to my beta!!!!! <3333
Summary: From the first moment that he met Kamenashi Kazuya, Yamashita Tomohisa knew, just knew, that somehow, he had done something horrible to the

Comments

[reddorozette]

Holy fuck. Excuse me for swearing, but that's about all I can force out of my head right now. I'm... I feel odd *laughs* The way you wrote this story was so capturing that I have actually spent the last few hours without being aware of my own existence, as strange as that may sound. The story pulled me in completely.

Before I praise you to a heavenly extent, I'm going to quote a few things from this last part... The fact that I'm quoting less in this last comment doesn't mean that this last part would be any worse than the others - on the contrary. I was really wrapped up in this chapter, especially the last flashback/dream because it was so... shocking, to put it mildly.

I’m not going to destroy something I care about in order to chase a memory.

;---; ♥

Finally, came a little voice inside of his head. Or maybe it was his heart.

... ;---; ♥

“Look, I’ll explain things from my point of view to you later,” Nishikido said after a moment, “If you still want to hear it. But you should really hear it from him first.” He said pointing at Yamapi, “You’re dating him. Unless you want to turn this into a threesome -”

“Ryo,” Kamenashi looked irritated, “Do you have to turn everything into a proposition for sex?”

I cracked up so hard ide :'D A nice way to lighten the mood a little, lol. Oh, dear.

Anyways... yeah. To say that I liked this is an understatement, this is brilliant; well-written, witty and very emotional. The characters are exactly to my liking (borderline schizophrenic Yamapi and bitchy, emotionally distant Kame ftw ♥) and the plot, gosh, how could I even attempt to express myself properly here? I loved it, and beyond. I kept thinking there has to be more to the story, without accepting the fact that he could, in fact, be simply dreaming about a previous life. Idek. I do blame this on being tired, seriously :'>

What I loved perhaps most about this story is how metaphorical it is - I don't know if you intended it to be, though, but it is. All this talk about past life, different personalities within a single person, the forms of ourselves that we might not even be aware of but yet still exist... it's brilliant. (I wonder how many times I've already used that word. Also, I hope you're not sitting there thinking I am the weirdo here, not Yamapi...) Letting our fears control us, and letting our past define us, it's something everyone can relate to.

In short, thank you so much for writing such a deliciously addicting piece of art ♥ *bows*

[songkissed]

aww, but I'm flattered that you were so drawn into the fic :DDD It means I did a good job :) I was actually REALLY close to giving up on this idea a few times but obviously it was a good thing that I kept going because your reaction is total <3

and I...really didn't mean for it to be that way, not intentionally. I realized that I was writing about something very fantasy - the past life thing - so I tried to incorporate as much realism in there as I could :DDD so i guess i kind of meant to do that, but not really haha XDD but I'm definitely happy to hear that you felt you could relate to it <33333

I should be thank you for leaving me such wonderful, beautiful, comments ♥ seriously, they make me so happy to read XDD and haha, I should be thankking you for having the patience to read through all five parts lol