SGA: Cleave, NC-17, McKay/Sheppard, 1/2

[amific]

Title: Cleave
Author: Amireal
Rating: NC-17, ~15,000 words.
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Warnings: None?

Author's notes: OMG z_rayne the evil bitch gave me a deadline. *collapses in fatigue* . Though I suppose since she was the beta, it's okay. Considering she mainlined this fic for SEVEN hours the night before she went to writercon? I'm okay with the deadline

Comments

[wicked_socks]

Oh I love this so so much! Just thought I'd point out a typo before rushing on to the rest.

Rodney gaped. "They stoned you?" He reached out, touching Sheppard's shoulder briefly. He wanted to ask 'What did you do?' only it never got out because Sheppard just looked so tired and hurt. "Are bleeding internally?" He asked instead.

[amireal]

Okay you're going to need to be far more specific. Not seeing it :). This would be why my beta curses me. :)

[wicked_socks]

Are [you] bleeding internally?

Sorry. After so many hours of writing I doubt I'd see it either. :)

Also I finished and this fic is way awesome. The line about visiting only if Teyla knew their mothers made me laugh so much.

Thank you for writing it!

[_inbetween_]

Mmh, nice, liked their chess games. Been (not) working on a fic where J was allergic to coffee and the resulting problems when intimate with R, but this is better.

[melagan]

The Ultimate Safe Sex. *adores* Now I'm off to read part 2

[ratcreature]

Wow, this sex scene was strangely hot despite being very odd with the whole gloves and poncho thing. I guess it'd work better for them if they had a latex or rubber fetish... *g*

[girly_curl_3]

I can't believe how hot that was despite the fact that I was picturing Rodney all bundled up in a blaze orange rain poncho!

Love this. Off the read the next part.