Fic: Leavenworth, SGA, NC-17, McKay/Sheppard (1/2)

[amific]

Title: Leavenworth
Author: Amireal
Rating: NC-17
Length: Approx 13,000 words.
Author's notes: Beta thanks to fairestcat and lierdumoa (whom I apologize to for posting this without hearing from you on that last thing, but OMG I HAVE NO NAILS LEFT), eternal gratitude because oh god, I wrote this while SO SICK and the keystrokes I missed were abominable. Also thanks for

Comments

[margueritem]

I haven't read it (I don't read that fast), but I just wanted to say, "Yay! New long SGA McKay/Sheppard fic!"

Anything distracting me from my thesis is good and yet evil. Thank you!

*goes off to read*

[lillyjk]

huzzah! downloads to palm pilot. will comment after I read. but HUZZAH

[amireal]

*bites nails and awaits comment*

[lillyjk]

*g* I always love your stuff. Especially the long stuff. I can put in on my palm pilot and read on the sly at work

[sageness]

caught a wee typo: seems ==> seams.

Love it so far. Off to part 2! :D

[amireal]

Fixed and YAY!

[stellahobbit]

Before I go onto the next part -

but keeps one wary eye? on John who freezes

[eotu]

This is wrong on so many levels, and I'm loving it so much. I have way too much work and I still want to go for Part 2 now.

Nit-pick: you might want to search and destroy these instances of apostrophe abuse:
Rodney let's go of his shirt
Sheppard let's out a breathy sound.

[amireal]

Jesus I thought I'd DONE that already.

*headesks in shaaame*