unspoken wishes & broken promises; nichkhun/jaebum

Feb 18, 2011 16:52


unspoken wishes & broken promises
nichkhun/jaebum; pg; 714w
nichkhun stop putting hopes on wishes.

A/N: for maltmilk  @ kpopvalentines, original  here
prompt: 2pm, nichkhun/jay, this

Nichkhun stopped putting hopes on wishes, because even promises ends up broken. )

♥ jaebum, #drabble, pairing: nichkhun/jaebum, ♥ nichkhun

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lettherebeminho February 18 2011, 13:17:12 UTC
i like it.
it was short and simple and got the message across without wasting words.
plus, anything Khun or Jay related is going to have my undivided attention.
:)

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dreamoscope February 18 2011, 13:22:50 UTC
thank you :)
i thought i wasted too much words on this already.. some parts feels... draggy.
but glad you like it anyway :) is khunjay one of your otp? :P

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lettherebeminho February 18 2011, 20:34:56 UTC
yeah, it's one of the first otps i was introduced to so it has a special place in my heart. along with TaecJay. haha

if anything, i need to practice writing shorter fics myself. lol

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dreamoscope February 19 2011, 01:22:02 UTC
ooh i love taecjay too :D but i never seem to be able to write jay somehow - especially his dialogues.

im the total opposite, i need to practice writing longer fics! lol all i can write these days is drabbles :X horrible.

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lettherebeminho February 19 2011, 02:30:43 UTC
i love writing Jay. he's one of my favorites to write in general. lol
i've already got an idea for a fic loosely based on the 5Dolls MVs. but i haven't started writing it yet. lol

i don't think i've ever written a drabble before, now that i think about it.
haha even some of my oneshots are so long i have to split them into multiple parts when i post. lol

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dreamoscope February 19 2011, 15:27:31 UTC
5dolls mv!!! i love jay in there, the way they make his character in there is just ♥
ill be waiting for that :DDD haha.

drabbles are so tempting for me because its so short and quick, and generally a good exercise to flesh out prompts when you get stuck with writers block :)

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