Comments | amidalashari: Sweet Sixteen

amidalashari

Sweet Sixteen

Feb 15, 2007 00:20

Title: Sweet Sixteen
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing(s): Peter/Claire
Word Count: 170
Rating: R

Summary: When she smiles at him, his heart stops.

Notes: Spoilers for episode 1:14 - Distractions. Non-AU. Written for fivebyfiction monthly challenge "deviant."

( And I'd do anything )

heroes: peter, heroes: claire, heroes: peter/claire, heroes, fivebyfiction

Comments 31

marble_rose February 14 2007, 14:37:43 UTC

Being damned to hell never felt so good. This was gorgeous and subtle and *insert gushing compliments and squees*. Very hot.

amidalashari February 14 2007, 14:44:32 UTC

Wow, thank you!! In my head it was longer and smuttier, but I'm actually quite happy with how it turned out.

paynesgrey February 14 2007, 15:13:20 UTC

Lovely, just lovely. In so few words, this was just very heartfelt. It's forbidden yet it seems so pure. Beautiful job.

amidalashari February 14 2007, 15:20:55 UTC

Thank you so much!

frellingblonde February 14 2007, 15:37:35 UTC

GUH. Absolutely gorgeous and hot.

*gets back to work on her own Pairecest fic*

amidalashari February 14 2007, 16:04:33 UTC

Thank you! And yay for Pairecest :D

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amidalashari February 14 2007, 16:37:42 UTC

Thank you!! Love the icon, too :D

ellamalfoy8 February 14 2007, 17:22:27 UTC

Gah. It's seems so sinful and yet you can help but bounce up and down after reading it. Paireceset is the cest cest.

amidalashari February 14 2007, 18:26:08 UTC

Thanks!!

Paireceset is the cest cest.

Haha, yeah. If the season doesn't end in one big canon Petrellicest orgy, I'll be shocked, I tell you.