Comments | ami_ven: [Stargate: Drabble] "Last First Kiss" [Sam/Jack, G]

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[Stargate: Drabble] "Last First Kiss" [Sam/Jack, G]

Nov 23, 2011 20:17

Title: Last First Kiss
Author: Ami Ven
Fandom: Stargate SG-1
Pairing: Sam Carter/Jack O'Neill
Genre: het.
Prompt: 100_tales #051 'kisses'
Rating: G
Word Count: 400
Summary: They had a lot of kisses that didn't count before they got to the ones that did.

( Last First Kiss )

100_tales, drabble, stargate, sam/jack

Comments 14

sharp2799 November 24 2011, 02:08:02 UTC

Sweeet!

ami_ven November 25 2011, 05:13:29 UTC

Thank you!

sb158 November 24 2011, 04:11:56 UTC

Awwww. I like this one. It's very sweet. I knew he was a big ole marshmallow inside, no matter how hard he tried to hide it!

ami_ven November 25 2011, 05:13:53 UTC

Thank you!

serenitymeimei November 24 2011, 04:37:16 UTC

That was so adorable. I haven't read Sam/Jack in such a long time, and this was a brilliant re-introduction. Thank you for posting!

ami_ven November 25 2011, 05:14:07 UTC

Thank you, and you're welcome!

thothmes November 24 2011, 08:21:15 UTC

You know that your title begs the question "Which was the Best First Kiss?" don't you?

I really like this piece all out of proportion for its size.

It says so much in just these two sentences:

No, their first real kiss, just them and nothing else, happened at the pond with nothing in particular to cause it. The kiss was gentle and unhurried, as if it was only the first of a thousand, a million, a billion more kisses to come.

ami_ven November 25 2011, 05:14:49 UTC

Thank you!

That is a question I'm not even going to try to answer ;)

ardvari November 24 2011, 15:14:47 UTC

*happy sigh* That was sweet and awesome!

ami_ven November 25 2011, 05:14:57 UTC

Thank you!