MLB PD 2

[americanleaguer]

I hate you all. This is definitely turning into a series. I'm going to have to make a fucking icon.

Second installment of the MLB PD AU. If you haven't read the first installment of this AU ( Bust), I suggest you do so, because although this one goes into some of the background, the first one sets the premise, introduces the characters, and some

Comments

[littlestclouds]

I am kind of loving your Pujols. He's a lot of fun. And I'm enjoying all these cameos. I still can't get over Zito as the drug pushing hooker. It's just too awesome.

I'll make you icons if you want! :D

[americanleaguer]

That was not the last we've seen of Zito, so fear not.

Ugh, this story is so deranged.

[orochi_kitty]

Haha I'm glad you posted more! I'm way to amused by this story.
Now I'm going to be thinking of my team in police uniforms now when they play oi XD

[americanleaguer]

My work here is done. ;)

[drummergroupie]

I am in love with this so hardcore.

I love the cameos. Well, obviously, 'cos that's my team, but they're all very well thought out and the dynamics are all great. And Pujols is too hilarious. And I can definitely see him doing a lot of those things since he's such a buddy to all his teammates.

And Mark and Danny make me very happy. Too adorable.

Can't wait for more ;D

[americanleaguer]

It's kinda hilarious that I'm writing them-- I mean, hello, americanleaguer. But I guess I can't let even the strange wilderness of the NL keep me from my whacked-out AU!

[maverickgopher]

I agree with the masses, Pujols is my favorite. He deserves some love for sure.

This whole concept could turn out kinda weak if done by the wrong person but you, my friend, are definitely the right person for this. It's brilliant.

[americanleaguer]

I was telling someone else that I want to do one of the installments, at least, from Pujols' POV. 'Cause he definitely has to be one of the main characters, not a sidekick.

I think most fanfic/slash is in that category: almost anything can be amazing with a good writer, and most of it is just horrific with anything less, ha ha. So thank you!

[raspsun]

Firstly, I'm crazy endeared by this visual: he was going home and polishing his badge up every night so it’d shine brightly under the station lights when he reported every morning.

This fic combines so many things I love, I've totally lost count. And I'm taking it seriously and not-seriously all at the same time, and giggling and guh-ing in equal parts. So, basically: yay!

[americanleaguer]

I'm taking it seriously and not-seriously all at the same time

I expect this is probably the only way to read it, heh. If you try to take it too seriously you're clearly out of your mind, but it's not pure crack (I don't think).