fic: A Beautiful Mess, 8/22

[amelialourdes]

Fic: A Beautiful Mess, 8/22
Summary: Luke is a pediatrician! He is officially Dr. Luke Snyder.
Spoilers: References to Luke's past from canon and that's about it.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Wish they were mine but they're not.
Note: This was inspired by this entry in lure_prompts by the brill _alicesprings. Feedback, concrit, etc. welcome

Comments

[_alicesprings]

OMG YOU LEFT IT THERE WHAT THE FUCK????????

[_alicesprings]

Luke laughs and that's exactly what Reid wants to hear. Inside, he's seething at the thought of having to see that Noah again. Reid's amazed by this innate protective feeling that he has when it comes to Luke Snyder. It's yet another new feeling that settles into him like a second skin. As much as this should terrify him, it doesn't.

Beautiful, beautiful!!

Loved this chapter! And especially the PDA kisses in the doctors' lounge, eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! :D

OMG can't wait for the next chapter ohhhhhhhhhmyyyyyyygoddddddddddddddd!!! Soon plzplzplzplz.

[amelialourdes]

I KNOW. I SUCK, OMG. :X

[_alicesprings]

YOU CAN MAKE IT UP TO ME BY POSTING AGAIN TONIGHT. :D

A chorus of "Luke" begins to ring out as soon as Luke enters the room.

Reid takes a step back to observe it all. He doesn't think that he's ever met anyone that's so well-liked as Luke Snyder. Everyone loves him. He's starting to think that he might too.

DON'T THINK I DIDN'T SEE THAT.

[astrolatryae]

Honestly, I just finished re-reading this story, because I was in the mood too, and i thought, "Oh, before I sign out, I'll refresh the friends page one last time" and poof! Excellent timing there, because there was a new chapter up and ready for me.

I've been waiting ever-so-patiently for Noah to show up at the worst possible moment, and you didn't disappoint. I love the way you've brought out Luke's insecurities and made them the center, in some ways, of how he defines himself, and I love that Reid couldn't disagree with them more. Every place Luke sees a fault, Reid manages to see something special.

Your work excites me every time I see it. Waiting for this chapter was worth the torture! I hope your noah_who fic is progressing nicely, and good luck with the other challenge you're doing, whatever it may be!

[amelialourdes]

I'm so glad that you did! Thank you so much for your comments and I agree with your observations, hee. Thank you again for reading and commenting! I really, really appreciate it. I also hope that the two challenges progress, lol. I keep getting distracted by this story. Not a bad thing but the other two things have deadlines. :D

[shadownyc]

I love this new chapter! It's great to see Reid protective, and Luke able to accept Reid's love and support as they return to the house and face everyone, including Noah.

It's obvious how much Reid and Luke are developing a healthy, respectful, loving relationship... and are NOT hiding it one bit. :D

[amelialourdes]

Thank you so much!

It's obvious how much Reid and Luke are developing a healthy, respectful, loving relationship... and are NOT hiding it one bit. :D

I love this v. v. much, thank you! That is certainly the goal.

[suzvoy]

FAIL, LILY.

He was so deep that I think he was about to hit Narnia in there.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, ILU!

[amelialourdes]

LILY = FAILBOMB. :|

NOAH IN NARNIA, THIS STORY IS WRITING ITSELF. <3

[joann414]

Reid and Luke are perfect together. Reid makes Luke realize that he is not the beat up puppy that NOah almost created. Luke is a strong man with a hot hot new boyfriend that loves him very much, and is just beginning to realize it. Thanks

[amelialourdes]

Yes! You are definitely right there on all counts. Thank you so much for reading!