Perfect

[amaryllisssa]

It’s perfect, she says, as she stands outside, keys in hand. The house has classic proportions, a pillar either side of the front door, well groomed box trees, a semi-circular drive. It is perfect, or very nearly perfect, she thinks as she notices the leaves on the lawn, swirling in the first autumn winds.

She walks closer, raises her hand to insert

Comments

[kaige68]

WOW

This is so well done and thought provoking and heavy. Tremendous work.

[amaryllisssa]

Thank you - for noticing it, for taking the time to comment, and for what you said!