Comments | amarin_rose: Fic: Becoming, Birds Of Prey, Babs/Dinah, PG, 1/1

amarin_rose

Fic: Becoming, Birds Of Prey, Babs/Dinah, PG, 1/1

Mar 05, 2007 04:49

Dinah has man problems. Barbara helps, after a fashion.

( “I should have become a nun,” Dinah announced. )

babs/dinah, birds of prey, barbara gordon, batverse, dcu comics, dinah lance, femslash, fanfic

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amarin_rose March 5 2007, 21:00:19 UTC

Yes, well, this only happened because of the conjunction of two things: my desire to write this pairing at least once, and the DC Scenario Generator throwing me the 'nun' line.

I am glad you liked it, however; I wasn't sure I'd written them right.

greeneyelove March 5 2007, 23:00:52 UTC

Dinah loved Ollie like she loved Dick; it was just taking Dinah longer to realize that love wasn’t always enough to build a relationship on.

That line sums it up perfectly. You did great with writing them.

amarin_rose March 6 2007, 19:20:01 UTC

Aw, thanks. I'm pretty proud of that line myself. Of course, it doesn't make sense why Dinah can't let go of Ollie if Babs can let go of Dick; Dick may have issues, but he didn't cheat on her.

1_900_mimicry March 11 2007, 20:12:20 UTC

Dinah/Babs! They really are one of the best "best friends turned lovers" couples out there.

EEE! I really loved this. Everything from Babs comforting Dinah after the breakup, to Dinah's cluelessness and little "Oh," of realization, up until the end and that last line that made me giggle and was just a perfect way to finish.

Also, the way they both repeated "You...really?" That bit of cuteness nearly slayed me. Aw, girls. You're totally right, who needs men anyway?

culuyetille March 12 2007, 22:34:09 UTC

This is so sweet! I love Dinah's über girliness - drowning her sorrows in chocolate - and how you've portrayed Barbara so strong and sensitive. Fantastic! :]