Comments | amand_r: Fic: Smoke 'em if you got 'em (RPS, JB/GDL/EM)

amand_r

Fic: Smoke 'em if you got 'em (RPS, JB/GDL/EM)

Mar 28, 2010 23:43

Title: Smoke 'em if you got 'em
Fandom: Torchwood RPS
Characters: John/GDL/Eve
Rating: R?
Wordcount: 4,450
Author's Notes: Written for the March RPF Carnivale.
Summary: Sometime in all of it, Gareth's hand hits his and leaves Eve's hair, and he's pressing, squeezing a little, and John leans back and presses the back of his skull into the wall ( Read more... )

gdl reads my blog, i blame crue, john barrowman? what john barrowman?, rps, rpf

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tktrix March 29 2010, 06:00:31 UTC

lol, "I could eat the fuck ..." So. So. funny!

amand_r March 29 2010, 14:40:27 UTC

I COULD EAT THE FUCK OUT OF A CROISSANWICH RIGHT NOW.

tktrix March 30 2010, 01:03:45 UTC

*laughs* you have perfect stoned Barrowman voice!

amand_r March 30 2010, 01:07:20 UTC

You just have to slow down your thought process, get really hungry and be distracted by shiny things.

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temporal_witch March 29 2010, 06:42:33 UTC

What an incredible combination of funny, hot, and heartbreaking. The end...that.

And I have to say you've written the pot well. OMG. Takes me back, oh yes. :D

I have to say I don't usually read RPF (just one of those things), but - it's YOU. I had to make an exception. Beautifully executed RPF, and a rarity in the genre. I enjoyed this immensely - thank you!

amand_r March 29 2010, 14:41:05 UTC

HAAAHAHAH THANKS.

I tried to draw on my wasted youth. I think I got it. Haahahaha.

temporal_witch March 29 2010, 15:37:57 UTC

Hehehehe...you said 'wasted'. That was cool. :D

opium_and_tea March 30 2010, 02:27:44 UTC

Pretty much this entire comment.

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paragraphs March 29 2010, 07:14:40 UTC

oh lol you posted it (not C, but for some reason she is logged in on my computer). I should repost mine sometime maybe (yah... maybe not). I feel all inspired for more RPF for some reason, can't fathom why.

And and -- I just reread this and am in love with the details of ASDA clothes and whatnot.

amand_r March 29 2010, 14:42:06 UTC

There's a rpf prompt on the kinkmeme that's about Gareth's new glasses. I bet you put it there. Lawl.

Repost yours, buddy because they rock.

cruentum March 29 2010, 21:59:06 UTC

OMG NO! But I thought about filling it! HAHA. It could totes mbe mine, I admit it

and nah, mine aren't cool like this. Lol

wildeagain March 29 2010, 22:24:41 UTC

You know, I think I identified @ least one of which was yours & it's one of my favs from the fest. I'm just sayin'.

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madder_rose March 29 2010, 08:46:29 UTC

♥ mwah.

"You two are fucking lightweights." They are! And they're in dire need of pizza, m&m's and a few soft drinks.

amand_r March 29 2010, 14:42:24 UTC

MMMMMMM SOFT DRINKS.

51stcenturyfox March 29 2010, 11:20:32 UTC

Still brilliant. This made me want to eat all the food in the world ever.

In a trailer. :D \O/

amand_r March 29 2010, 14:44:06 UTC

I am more curious than ever now to see what those trailers look like from the inside. The whole time I wrote this I kept thinking of the interior of the Winnibago in From Dusk Til Dawn, especially the bathroom.

51stcenturyfox March 29 2010, 14:58:24 UTC

That is exactly the same mental picture I had! :D

I suppose they might be prettier or more modern than that? I don't know!

Marcia Cross on Desperate Housewives has a fancy, apartment-style trailer.