Fic: Clarity (TW, J/I/L, Gold dust fic for askance)

[amand_r]

Title: Clarity 2/2
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Jack/Ianto/Lisa, Gwen, OCs
Rating: R for sex and violence
Wordcount: 18,000
Author's Notes: This was written for askance in the help_haiti auction. She requested the following: post Gold Dust - how did Pen come to be born with such a big gap between her and her brother? Or maybe how her birth changes the family

Comments

[nancybrown]

You know I am full of happy flail over this, y/y? The birthday party! The multiple pregnancy tests! And just ... them! Being them and awesome! And poor Ravi!

*gets out glitter pen to draw hearts all around story*

Yay!!!!

[amand_r]

LOLOR5. Thanks. It was domestic and explodey and shit. Woot!

[cruentum]

I read this again, because I could and I still have the same stupid 'oh baby' reaction.

Also made me tear up again, Ravi.

And I love Lisa.

[amand_r]

Poor Ravi. I acknowledge it. Whoops.

[blue_fjords]

I am so in love with this story. Especially Ianto in this story. How very much he wants the baby, how he observes and thinks and holds his breath (I don't know if that makes sense, but it's like we're in his brain and looking out through his eyes and it's a place we connect with so wholeheartedly), and how he is with Penny. This ending is one of the best endings ever, ever, ever. I really loved it.

[amand_r]

Oh my little bleu bleu, thank you.

[topgeargirl2]

This was very good

[amand_r]

Thanks, C. :D

[golden_d]

Ravi made me get all sniffly, on a day that was already a sniffly kind of day. Clearly the thing to do here is have more cookies and/or wine to console myself, because I am so full of healthy coping mechanisms.

That said: Any story that makes me mourn for a character must be an excellent story. And this, indeed, is. :)

[amand_r]

I believe in the application of wine. Apply as needed. Often.

Thanks so much for reading! I am glad that you liked, even if you is be sniffly over it.