Comments | amand_r: The West Wing drabble

amand_r

The West Wing drabble

Jun 24, 2007 15:19

( TWW, Leo and anyone else, lucky tie. For Unovis. )

Comments 10

amonitrate June 24 2007, 21:35:20 UTC

"It has character."

"If the character you're going for is The Grinch," CJ murmured.

snort.

Between this and mogwai_do's earlier lament I'm starting to crave West Wing fic.

bravo! You really nailed Bartlett in one of his moods.

amand_r June 24 2007, 22:23:34 UTC

I was going for that Sorkin banter. That was the best part of the show. Now, on to your drabble.

arsenicjade June 24 2007, 23:16:27 UTC

OMG, fucking awesome. Also, I may hate you and your brilliance.

amand_r June 25 2007, 02:01:13 UTC

Trust me, I'm so totally not that brilliant, as I keep reminding myself when I work on my chapbook.

unovis June 25 2007, 02:14:47 UTC

Wonderful! Thanks!

I love the back-and-forth (especially Jed on word formation) and the Jed-Charlie tease. Nice hand with the dialogue.

amand_r June 25 2007, 02:26:28 UTC

Thanks! I had no idea where I was going, and here it is!

After I wrote it I looked up "fidgeter" and it is a word, dammit.

jotribe July 3 2007, 22:55:09 UTC

You really caught their dialogue.
CJ didn't look up from her brief. "Is that even a word?"
Very fun!

amand_r July 4 2007, 02:19:10 UTC

Thanks!

irishkate July 10 2007, 16:52:06 UTC

Thank you for this.. It brought smiles where they were needed

amand_r July 10 2007, 17:00:38 UTC

Thanks!