The first TW/DW RPF COMMENT-FIC CARNIVALE!

Mar 06, 2010 10:35

Oh hallo. Are you here for something?

Of course you are.

What's your name? You're Candy?

Of course you are.

On behalf of Myself, cruentum, and degenerates everywhere, welcome to:


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Re: Desperate Debut - John/David - NC17 (part2) ebineez01 March 7 2010, 13:43:33 UTC
John stripped his t-shirt off over his head. He walked to where David still sat on the lounge and stroked a finger along the line of his jaw. “Jacuzzi!” he called already on his way out the glass door to the balcony.

David let out a breath he’d been holding since John’s pants had hit the floor, and he realised that he was actually a little disappointed.

“Come on,” yelled John from the balcony as he lowered himself into the bubbling, steaming water.

David walked out to lean against the doorframe and he couldn’t help but laugh at his friend as he floated around the oversized tub.

John was trying not to watch David as he stood in the doorway, but he was really failing miserably. He’d had a few too many vodka-tonics in too short a time whilst they were watching the show and he was feeling...happy. He watched as David undid his thick leather belt, popping the buttons on his jeans. He let his eyes linger on David’s flat stomach as his rising t-shirt revealed a surprising amount of muscle. He laid his head backwards and looked up at the sky trying not to focus on his burgeoning erection.

“Jesus that’s hot!” cried David as he lowered himself in across from John.

Taking a deep breath John looked up, to see David looking straight at him. David’s eyes stayed on his for a moment before dropping, slowly travelling down his torso, the feeling so strong it felt as if it were David’s hands on him. He moaned at the thought, feeling his now hard cock twitch in response. Laying his head back on the side of the tub again he closed his eyes.
David looked at him, at that face, those lips, the strong arms and smooth chest. He looked back to John’s face to find him looking at the sky again. He swallowed as his eyes followed the now highlighted line of jaw and neck, down to the hollow at his throat...and he was moving.

John didn’t open his eyes, not when he felt the water shift around him. Not when he felt David’s warm tongue on the hollow of his throat, causing goose-pimples to rise. Not even when he felt strong hands on his thighs, slim hips between his knees.

David could feel John’s cock as hard as his own as he pressed close. Sliding his hands up muscular thighs, he gripped John’s amazing arse and easily lifted him in the water, slipping underneath him so he was kneeling on the shallow seat, John’s thighs circling his hips. He pulled him in tight pushing forward so their cock’s slid against each other through the fabric of their boxers.

He felt David at the front of his boxers, felt his erection bob free as the button released.

David worked his own boxers open, pulling himself free, a gasp escaping him at the touch of silk on silk. He saw John’s knuckles turn white where he gripped the side of the Jacuzzi as he wrapped his hand around them both.

John screwed his eyes shut tighter as David tightened his grip, increasing his pace. He bit down on his bottom lip to stifle the groan as David ran his other hand over his chest.

Coming further up onto his knees, David worked them harder feeling John start to pump into his hand.

John gripped the tub as hard as he could, giving himself more leverage to fuck David’s fist.

David pushed forward now timing his thrusts with Johns. John groaned and his hips thrust hard pushing into David’s stomach sending him spinning.

Feeling the strong pulse of John’s orgasm under his fingers, against his own heated flesh David succumbed to his own release.

After a moment John felt David’s lips brush lightly against his own. “Best premiere ever,” a soft whisper against his ear.

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Re: Desperate Debut - John/David - NC17 (part2) cruentum March 7 2010, 15:52:37 UTC
David's got it right, John shouldn't be spending the premiere of his ep on his own. And nice sexy finish there. Enjoyed that.

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Re: Desperate Debut - John/David - NC17 (part2) ebineez01 March 8 2010, 08:00:02 UTC
nah he shouldn't. I saw David on Graham Norton last year & he said he'd be in LA filming a pilot... ;D. glad you enjoyed it

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Re: Desperate Debut - John/David - NC17 (part2) amand_r March 7 2010, 16:35:11 UTC
OMG THESE JACUZZI FICS ARE KILLING ME.

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Re: Desperate Debut - John/David - NC17 (part2) ebineez01 March 8 2010, 08:01:19 UTC
LMAO! I haven't seen any others...point the way?

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Re: Desperate Debut - John/David - NC17 (part2) wynkat1313 March 7 2010, 18:55:11 UTC
ooooh yeah!

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Re: Desperate Debut - John/David - NC17 (part2) ebineez01 March 8 2010, 08:02:08 UTC
mmmm...yeah ;D

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