Machines of Freedom: Chapter 8

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[wendelah1]

John is great here. He is really in his element.

Rereading this, it was horrible seeing Mulder hit Casey. His anger is real and he is one scary dude.

The anger he is feeling toward William's parents is understandable in a way (he is standing in for the more irrational subset of fans) but scary, too. And as much as I get it, I really dislike it. Not his finest moment here. I do like that you let your characters be flawed. It makes them just that much more real.

[heartequals]

"Because I need you," he said quietly. "You're the reason I'm alive."

She snorted. "Walter Skinner and a backhoe is the reason you're alive."

I am an expert in the field of amazingness and I have just determined that this is the most amazing.