Machines of Freedom: Chapter 3

[amalnahurriyeh]

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[colebaltblue]

"No," he said again. "I won't let you take him.

Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit.

You know, I've always wondered why Scully and Mulder behaved as they did regarding William - why Mulder left and Scully stayed. I really don't agree with what I feel the canon tried to chalk it up to. I like it when fanfic authors have them address it since it obviously is the 300lb gorilla in the room.

I'm really enjoying this and the tension is amazing!

[amalnahurriyeh]

The whole William arc is so fucking broken. I tried to fix it some. Let me know how it works.

I think this may actually be the best cliffhanger in the piece, actually.

&hearts

[wendelah1]

I agree, you build up the tension very well here. I didn't think you'd kill off the Van De Kamps but it had been done enough times that just having them make an appearance put me on edge. Also, I was not expecting what did happen.