Together

Jul 16, 2011 00:51

This is in response to willow2883 's prompt on my drabble meme.  Of course, since I fail at drabbles, everyone is getting one-shots.  They fought me tooth and nail on this, bb, so sorry for the delay.  It's also my first ever lemon.  I hope you like it.

Prompt:  Twilight | Jacob/Bella | Jacob has just slid into the sleeping bag with Bella and Edward is ( Read more... )

jakeandbells, twilight, drabble, fanfiction

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lsjcandy July 21 2011, 13:24:37 UTC
I WAS WAITING FOR THIS. Almost thought you'd forgotten. In all honesty, I still have some undone prompts, too.
As I tell any author, I love an insight in Jacob's mind. The swearing, mainly, is what makes it real. There's not one day I don't cuss mentally. Then there is the sarcasm and wittiness, and overall hate for Edward, and the love for Bella, of course.
This, by the way, is sexiness from the start.

My cock is touching Bella’s crotch.
Lololol. Poor Eddiekins having to listen to such vulgair thoughts xd

Your first time lemon was incredible, like, yum. Not too long, or too descriptive. Although I do think you could've made it a bit more... well, as if either one of them was actually worried. (Contraception, for example.)

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amaggiepie July 21 2011, 15:18:31 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it! I had fun with the Jacob snark, I have to say. It's so much easier for me to get into his head than Bella's...

Although I do think you could've made it a bit more... well, as if either one of them was actually worried. (Contraception, for example.)There is a reason (as there is with everything that I write, really) that I did it this way. This was kind of like what my first time was like. Despite the fact that I knew all about birth control, and so did he, we were fooling around one day and it just happened. And I was SO. SCARED I would be pregnant. When I realized it afterwards, it was like a slap in the face with reality. I ended up having to tell my mom and she got me birth control right then. It was quite a mortifying conversation, with my boyfriend present, in which she asked him if he orgasmed. I nearly died ( ... )

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lsjcandy July 21 2011, 16:49:01 UTC
Ikr? Jacob's just more like the average person, when it comes to thinking. ('Cause, you know, his common sense tends to be present.)

Ah, well, in that sense, I understand it. And well, it's not like they carry condoms with them 24/7. Jacob isn't that hopeful and Bella's boyfriend's a bit too old-fashioned for Bella to be that hopeful.

In the literal heat of the moment (see what I did there?), no, even Bella would've done that in canon.

Of course, she still has to pay for what she did in Reality and Dreams.

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willow2883 July 21 2011, 18:04:48 UTC
Um, yeah, I was even dumber than you. I went for about a year w/o birth control. Thank the lord I never got pregnant.
And yeah, you are mean. :P
And hey! I'm trying to live down RaD with Intoxicating!
*mutters* Some people can just never forgive and forget.

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willow2883 July 22 2011, 03:45:05 UTC
It probably has something to do with those hot, sexy Aussie men! :P

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