Together

[amaggiepie]

This is in response to willow2883 's prompt on my drabble meme.  Of course, since I fail at drabbles, everyone is getting one-shots.  They fought me tooth and nail on this, bb, so sorry for the delay.  It's also my first ever lemon.  I hope you like it.

Prompt:  Twilight | Jacob/Bella | Jacob has just slid into the sleeping bag with Bella and Edward is

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[willow2883]

Okay, I'm only about one paragraph in and I'm giggling like a school girl already! I love, love, love the insight into Jacob's thoughts. Okay. *scrolls back up*
My cock is touching Bella’s crotch
I gasped out loud at that.
Well, she’s not cold down there at least
Bahahaha!
Gah! Great move making her too hot & removing the clothing. :)
“Please what?” She had to ask me. If she asked, I would do anything for her.
I LOVE when Jacob makes her ask for it!!
marking her as mine in the most primal way.
Love this line! Love the word 'primal'. Gah!
OMG! OMG! OMG! I loved this!!! YOu have to continue this! What happens when Edward comes back and finds out? Is Bella pregnant? What will they do? *stomps foot* Don't be a tease! You have to continue this!!
P.S. Thank you btw! I won't even harrass you about the belatedness. Haha. Mwah!

[amaggiepie]

I'm so glad you like it, bb!!!

Love this line! Love the word 'primal'. Gah!

I actually deleted and retyped that word about 3 times. I like it too, but IDK. When I write lemons I overthink every single word and I'm terrified things sound rediculous.

OMG! OMG! OMG! I loved this!!! YOu have to continue this! What happens when Edward comes back and finds out? Is Bella pregnant? What will they do? *stomps foot* Don't be a tease! You have to continue this!!
P.S. Thank you btw! I won't even harrass you about the belatedness. Haha. Mwah!

I'm glad you loved it. I don't know if I can continue it. Maybe one more part? I really don't know what happens next, LOL. I was with Jacob on not wanting to think about what would happen when Edward got back. Maybe Victoria would just kill him, problem solved. Ohhh. Now THERE's a PLOT BUNNY. Hahaha!

P.S. I am a TOTAL tease. ;)

[willow2883]

One more one-shot would do it. You don't have to go on for 20 chapters about it.
*whispers* Do it.
And see, all you needed to do was talk it out to figure out where to go with it. Although a confrontation between Eddie and Jake, with Bella standing behind Jacob for once, would be HOT!
Don't get yourself intimidated. I used to be scared to write Edward, but once I jumped in and did it, it was fun! Sometimes the stuff we try to talk ourselves out of cos we don't think we have it in us, is the stuff that comes out the best.
P.S. Yes you are. Welcome to the club. LOL

[amaggiepie]

Linking you this comment. Because I'm a meanie. Also, I'm serously thinking about part ii. I've never killed Eddie dearest before, but if I do it, things will probs be all angst angst angst so yeah...

[willow2883]

*snort* You don't have to KILL Eddie to get Bella to go to Jake. (Yes, I killed him, but Bella was already starting to lean toward Jacob before I killed Edward off.)

Plus it would be so hot to have Bella stand up to Edward with Jake for once. Just a suggestion. Cos Jacob is thatttt big. I mean, good! LOL

[amaggiepie]

But I want to kill him. *pouts* I kind of want him to die in a fantastical crackfic way. I can't do that of course, I love canon-complience and realism too much, but IDK. Despite the sex, Bella is still undecided about what she's going to do. Edward would probs forgive her for her "human urges" but I think her not being a virgin anymore qould cause some moral strife for him.

I'm gonna shut up now before I tell you the real plot. Which means there is a real plot. Written down. In my head, at least. :P

He really is THAT BIG. Oh, GOD. I have a picture for you!!! *runs to find it on Tumblr*

I'll BRB with the pic.

[willow2883]

He really is THAT BIG. Oh, GOD. I have a picture for you!!! *runs to find it on Tumblr*
I'll BRB with the pic.
HURRY! HURRY! HURRY! I'm dying here!
But I want to kill him. *pouts*
Okay, that made me laugh out loud! And I'm at work.
So you mean, if I keep asking you questions, you'll eventually 'spill' the beans on the plot?
Hmmmm. *thinks up more questions*
P.S. HURRY!!!!!!

[willow2883]

Oh. My. God.
He only needs a thumb to maneuver, (what I was hoping was) his massive 10 inch thang??
It actually looks like he's pointing at it.
"Yep, there it is - have a look. You know you want it."
LOL That's hysterical.

[amaggiepie]

I was kind of disappointed in it, to tell you the truth. We have such *high* standards, don't we.

And I mean, TayTay isn't really 6'5" anyway...Jacob's would theoretically be bigger, right. RIGHT?!?! LOL

We have issues. WOW...

[willow2883]

Not that I've thought about this AT ALL, but I'm kinda hoping thinking that a 6'7 werewolf would be hung.
LOL And poor little Taytay aint even 5'9. :(
You do the math.

[amaggiepie]

Ok.

HERE IT IS

Caught RED HANDED. Adjusting the junk!

That's my tumblr, BTW. :3

[willow2883]

Okay, gonna just fill this whole page with comments till you want to smack me! Didn't know you had a tumblr! Cool
Anne Boelyn, of course! Went to London in February and the only thing I wanted to see was the Tower of London, so I could see where she was decapitated. How the hell you don't sleep with a man and keep him interested (just answered my own question there!) for SEVEN years. I'm sorry - that bitch deserves major props!