Fic: Prelude in C Minor (Primeval, Abby/Connor, PG13, angst)

[alyse]

Title: Prelude in C Minor
Author: alyse
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Comments

[dominique012]

Wow...this is amazing! Your storytelling is brilliant - the sights, sounds, and places are so vivid. I really felt a sense of Connor being lost and scared, and now that things are getting even more intriguing, I can't wait to see what will happen to them! Thank you so much - I'm loving it.

[alyse]

Thank you :) I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it (I was a bit nervous that you wouldn't :)).

[szychogirl]

Abby always drives when it’s just the two of them. There’s a twisted kind of logic in that, but thinking about it hurts.
Great line, been wrapping my brain around it since I read it.

You captured Connor so well, along with the scenery, wonderful stuff. I'm sure I'll be re-reading this, and soon :)

[alyse]

Thank you :)

[mad_arthist]

great great great great.......just great

[alyse]

Thank you :)

[deinonychus_1]

omg! This is just heartbreakingly painful, and yet compulsive reading.

*scuttles off to part 2*

[alyse]

I was kind of down when I first came up with the idea. Unfortunately at the time, I couldn't write either, so I'm just pleased that dominique12's prompts gave me a chance to :)

[skylar0grace]

This was amazing mate! I was led here by Dream To Die (which I added straight to memories) and decided to read through more of your work. In a totally non-stalkerish kinda way! This was just awesome though; I can't wait to read the rest :D

[alyse]

Thank you :) And I don't think reading back through someone's fic is a stalkerish thing to do at all - I know I certainly do it! The way I see it, that is exactly why tags exist :)