So. Trolling the anon meme *gasp*
Yeah.
So. I have three criticisms so far:
1. Bad Summary. I know. I suck at those, always have. But wow. So, the mouses thought I was ESL. AHAHAHAHAH.
2. A misused semicolon IN the summary. Way to nitpick. Also, fixed.
3. HOLY SHIT I misspelled Gen's maiden last name. *STUPID*
But three teeny issues so far. I think I'm good. Will edit with further issues as they arise. Nothing like a good ol' anonymous to give ya what for, yeah?
ETA: Here's the link to my story's thread in the anon meme. So far? Nothing too heinous. :)
So. I have three criticisms so far:
1. Bad Summary. I know. I suck at those, always have. But wow. So, the mouses thought I was ESL. AHAHAHAHAH.
2. A misused semicolon IN the summary. Way to nitpick. Also, fixed.
3. HOLY SHIT I misspelled Gen's maiden last name. *STUPID*
But three teeny issues so far. I think I'm good. Will edit with further issues as they arise. Nothing like a good ol' anonymous to give ya what for, yeah?
ETA: Here's the link to my story's thread in the anon meme. So far? Nothing too heinous. :)