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Rider Of The Storm - HITTER

Jan 16, 2010 12:50

Author: kitty69lover
Rating: G
Category: comedy
Characters: Gerard Pique, other FCB footballers, (see tags)
Length: hitter
Originally posted on: 11.09.2009
Summary: one tries to catch while the other tries to not get caught.
Disclaimer: I do not own Gerard Pique or his family, or any of the other footballers mentioned in my story. This is just fiction, not the ( Read more... )

rating: non-explicit, gerard pique, fic: hitter, original female character(s), het, sergi busquets, original male characters(s), bojan krkic, sergio ramos, zlatan ibrahimovic, type: comedy

Comments 2

butbyskylight January 18 2010, 23:19:59 UTC

I could go on and on, but:
This.
Was.
AWESOME.

Storm's character is so fucking fantastic and I think I adore her. As suspicious as she is and somewhat possessive, she's still amazing. And she's so...complete for a character in a hitter, not two dimensional like many seem to be.

I really like how you found a balance between the events in Barcelona and with Storm driving home. That worked perfectly for this.

And the boys. Oh the boys. I can easily picture Gerard flying out of bed and getting his friends to help him fix the mess. And Zlatan suggesting Ikea made my night!

Lovely job :) *applauds*

kitty69lover January 19 2010, 07:20:10 UTC

;D *blushes* glad you liked this hun, i got so randomly inspired when i wrote this.

Storm is quite a force of nature, isn't she? lol i'm glad you liked her character, i really tried to present her as well as i could.

Zlatan makes my nights...with or without Ikea lol, god i'm such a sucker for him lol. they all had to help, after all, they helped cause the mess.

thanks for reading this hun, :D